No.49374
>>49371when I noticed that she is going to put star on her head first thought was that it will shatter into pieces as it is no way that fragile thing could be stabbed into her head
And it was still sort of hard to get if it is just placed on top or it is hammered into her because there is no blood on her face or anything.
>>49370So I got it almost right
>>49372You may also consider using hammer and nails if that fits somewhere.
although probably this is already getting overused LOL
No.49376
>>49374It was a holiday story. And I wanted to avoid blood wherever possible. So just a little saliva. LOL.
No.49397
Oh, that's lovely! Love seeing kids casually killing themselves / each other just for fun.
Although for my headcanon I would get rid of the sad and lonely parts, because admitting that death leads to sadness and loneliness defeats the point of casual guro for me. So let's say instead of "he realized the blonde won't play with him anymore" it's "they finished decorating the tree, so proceeded to the next game", and instead of "he was sad and lonely at the end" it's "he found a better toy in form of the broom, so he doesn't need this now" (but there's no sadness for missing the girl, he's happy he could satisfy her so well with the broom).
No.49412
>>49373Oh, you got great names for girls and it fits their character I will steal them for my stories. because all good girls names end with -y and and you brought up that it can by -ya too
As for the boy your names look good, but I would suggest Oliver which can be shortened to Ollie when they talk to each other. or your names can't be changed to sound more cute.
>>49376Does that suggests that you dislike blood in general?
No.49421
>>49412Blood is a secondary factor. I'm more interested in stuffing and metamorphosis. My inspiration: Roald Dahl and his Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. Lewis Carroll and his Alice's Adventures in Wonderland. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry and his Le Petit Prince. Hans Christian Andersen the way he really wrote. Naive tales of death. The main characters are children, but the tales are not children's tales.