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 No.21221[Reply]

Consolidating all my stories that take place in my "NanoTek" universe to this one thread.

 No.21222

Laura walks down the street rather dejectedly. She’s broke. And without work.


And worse yet, the newest "Dark Witcher" game came out today, and the young glum 20-year old doesn’t have any cash to grab it.


She makes her way to the bar planning to use her other assets in order to get herself a drink… and maybe pinch a wallet or two


The bar’s a complete dive, smelling of piss, with damn near every surface stained, and the bras of many of the female patrons hung up, nailed to the rafters.


Laura chose this bar because, even though the men there were not the most affluent, they were always hungry for a good night and an easy catch, and Laura was willing to play the part.


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 No.21425

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"Jenna, can you please come into my office for a moment?" asked the head doctor into his intercom.

"Yes doctor!" came the swift, cheery reply.

The sound of the phone clicking off immediately segued into the sound of high heels clicking outside the doctor's office. The sound grew louder until there was a knock on his door.

The door opened slightly and in stepped one nylon-clad leg, followed by a long, nude arm and hand with manicured fingernails which grabbed the door. The head and face of beautiful young Jenna peeked out from behind the door bearing a smile. "You wanted to see me sir?" she said in a cheery voice as she looked at him with her piercing blue eyes framed by her thin, stylish black-rimmed glasses.

"Yes Jenna, please come in!" replied the doctor.

She opened the door more and entered the rest of her body into his office. As she shut the door behind her with her back turned to him, the doctor took a quick but encompassing glance up and down her perfect body. She wore a light-brown short-sleeve blouse, a black mini-skirt that cut above her knees, and she clad her legs with dark nylon pantyhose ending at the conservative black pumps she wore on her feet. She had shortish, dark brown hair that she currently wore in a ponytail and her figure was that of an hourglass. Her face was radiant and tiny freckles occasionally dotted around her nose and forehead.

She was indeed beautiful and the doctor enjoyed seeing her every other day as part of her internship.

Jenna has been an intern for the doctor at the NanoTek corporation for the past few months. She would be graduating from college the next day, thus today is the final day of her internship.
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 No.21426

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Sequel to:
>>21425

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The janitor for this wing of NanoTek Corp got off the elevator and entered the reception to the head doctor's office. Expecting to be greeted by the doctor's bubbly receptionist Jenna, to his disappointment he is instead greeted by silence. A shame since he knows today is supposedly her last day.

Typically when he started his rounds, the janitor would swing by the head doc's office first as the doc tended to leave early, while Jenna typically stayed a little late to finish up her filing and such.

She's always so upbeat, cheerful and talkative - not to mention extremely cute - it would make the rest of janitor's night seeing her.

She'd often tell him about her busy life - running cross country for her school, studying to get accepted into a graduate school, and spending her weekends volunteering to help kids in need. At one point she mentioned that she grew up an orphan with no close family - and she thought volunteering would help children who had a similar time growing up as she did.

She also mentioned a new boy she had met while volunteering - and was hoping to pursue a deeper relationship with him now that she was graduating. From what she had revealed, this would be her first boyfriend.

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 No.21571

Ashley entered the office she was directed to from the temp agency. This was the undergrad's first day at her temp job, and she was a mix of nervous and excited. The cute redhead with freckled face and bluish-green eyes however had no idea that this temp job was going to be a bit more "permanent."

While the tests seemed morally wrong, especially to perform on young women just entering adulthood, the agency did not have much choice. Unknown to the majority of the world, a new World War was on the horizon, and this weapon would be the only thing that would put a swift end to it. So in the grand scheme of things, sacrificing a few dozen young bimbos would lead to the safety of the greater good, and the agency recognized that.

The scientists hit a road-block with the resonance wave weapon, finding that the weapon would only work on human females of a young age and low body-mass index. It had something to do with the way the machine was currently calibrated, and the only way to tweak the machine to work on all human beings was to continually test it on what it did work on - young, slim women. And luckily they were pretty easy to come by as many sought internships and temp jobs with the agency to look impressive when it came time to applying for college or future careers.

Unfortunately the previous test attempts before Ashley's have so far been pretty rocky. Their first test-fire of the resonance wave weapon was on a cute, pony-tailed blonde with blue eyes who was 25. She was known to the technicians only as "Specimen B240." Thinking they were taking a picture of her for an ID badge, she smiled wide as they fired the weapon. Instead of pulverizing her into microscopic dust as they were hoping, her entire body exploded across the room into a mess of blood and guts. It took a clean-up team hours to reset the room and get rid of every trace of remains the poor blonde left behind, and they were none too happy about it.

The next test had slightly more progress, but still left quite a mess. It was performed on "Specimen K503," a 21 year-old brunette with brown eyes. Also smiling at the thought of having her picture taken, this time the weapon focused all its energy into her brain and began to boil it. Her smiling face suddenly took on a blank stare as her jaw opened wide and her tongue hung out of her mouth. This was only for a few moments until her entire head exploded in much the same manner as the blonde's body. Her busty, headlePost too long. Click here to view the full text.

 No.21589

Those were great, I really love the way you describe all the little details. Especially enjoyed the slime/melting one, I may have imagined it happening to me :x



 No.5564[Reply]

It was just too good to last. Polaris is no more.

http://www.asstr.org/~Polaris/

If anyone has a collection of stories from the site, this would be the best place to dump them.

For those who don't know, Polaris was a master of the dark and twisted. Many of his stories, and the stories that he hosted, featured dark and brutal scenes of torture, often on children, sometimes even infants. He also had a penchant for scat, WS, abortion, incest, rape, and pretty much everything else you could think of.

Also ITT, discuss Polaris and his stories, and the stories he hosted. Truly a unique man with a unique talent.

Feel free to move this to /dis/ if it fits better there.
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 No.21388

It is good to see that people are still keeping polaris site alive. I miss it, and wish that he would come back. Polaris and Taz were good friends in this sick and twisted story line, and I enjoyed their minds very much.

 No.21436

>>21268

Well one of my main reasons I like it was because of how dark it is (Because i'm sick I liked how the fact that the victims were young) I especially liked the part where the two woman gouged out the eye balls of one of them and took a shit in her eye sockets.

 No.21466

>>21436

This was the part I disliked the most…
The part / the parts I loved most in Polaris' stories were his description of strong, cheeky, nymphomaniac, bisexual or lesbian, sadistic young female characters who hunt reckless and overpower mercyless weaker, even younger victims to get their sexual excitement and satisfaction.
In Polaris' words (if I remember correctly): stories of sexual aggresive women.

You know, each one has his own preferences and taste, and it is often the case, that the more crazy, weird, extreme the content, the more fascinating it becomes for some spectators. Why do so many people like horror movies? I guess, because they get the thrill, an excitement and a pleasurable shiver from the scenes which are the most scary ones. And for human beings, the dark, the forbidden also contains of a fascinating, attractive / magnetic and even sensual element. Why do graveyards appear to have kind of a fascinating aura for some people, and still these people love, celebrate and respect life.

As long as you're able to draw a clear line between fantasy and reality, as long as you're not going to hurt anybody (every creation, that has feelings: humans, animals, maybe even plants) and neither you're going to abet people to hurt others, you might discover your liking of and your preference for this kind of dark fantasies (and what belief system makes you call yourself to be sick and to be messed up). [I myself labelled this part of my personality, who has a preference for certain deviant fantasies, to be wrong and sick…].

BUT IF you feel that you want to transfer some dark fantasy into reality, hurting other creatures, THEN you really should see a doctor or a thearpist. And that wouldn't be a shame at all, because we humans often don't know consciously why we are how we are…
And hey, I'm a "normal" human being, not a therapist at all! Just sharing my personal thoughts.

 No.21531

There is a line that sperates fantasy from reality. I don't understand why I am into this type of fan fiction, but Have liked it most of my life. I remember the first time that I was found interest in aggressive and strong sadistic women, was when I was 8 and watched the movie last house on the left. The scene where they raped the two girls and had a women accomplice who enjoyed the rapes and murders, have always been a turn on to me. Ever since then I have been stuck. In early 2001 I found Polaris website and realized that I wasn't alone in this fantasy. It was a bit of a relief because I didn't feel alone anymore…. No one deserves to suffer in real life, but fantasy is not real and it cannot hurt anyone… That is why I loved Polaris site so much, it was a platform for stories such as these…. Anyway thanks fore reading this message….
Plus if anyone can find the story sister betrayed and family united part 2 I appreciate it….

 No.21569

>>21531

Thanks for your sharing. I guess, I'm like-spirited as you described it. I remember well that I was fascinated by watching a sadistic way of behaving already in my younger years. I always preferred to fantasize about being in the victims role and being overpowered by mischievous subjects who experienced excitement and joy by screwing somebody up. And I remember having this preference at an early age already. In my adolescence, about 13-14 years of age and over, my phatasies became intertwined with the sexual awakening in that age. So, the idea of cruel, sadistic, aggressive-voluptuous young women and a personal sexual arousal is intertwined in my brain ever since.

I didn't know the movie you mentioned. I watched a short trailer, a yeah, I can imagine that there are scenes who match with the topic/preference quite well. In my case, I remember best "James Bond - Golden Eye". The female enemy in that story plays with her skills of seduction and temptation and she really enjoys killing her victims. She's ice-cold and burning hot at the same time. And in those years, there were the movies "Basic Instinct" or "Wild things". I've never seen them completely, but I know that they contain these scenes where someone is brutally at the mercy of a young playful and destructive female.

I found Polaris' website years ago, more than a decade I guess. Today, I regret that I never wrote him in those days, to give an encouraging feedback and to thank for the effort.



 No.20452[Reply]

“Mom, mom, I made it, they’re going to cook me for the feast!” Thirteen-year-old Heidi beamed as soon as her mother returned from work and opened the front door. The dirty-blonde teen had found the letter from the girl meat restaurant in the mailbox when she came home from school, and had spent the time up until her mom came home masturbating furiously to the thought of soon fulfilling her desire to become girl-meat.

“Oh my, honey, that’s wonderful! I’m so happy for you,” Heidi’s mother said and gave her daughter a hug. “What about your friends, have you heard anything from them?”

“Yes, they were both selected as well! I think they’re just as excited as I am!”

Heidi, along with her two friends Suki and Padma, had applied to be meat-girls for a big feast that was being held in the town’s largest and fanciest girl-meat restaurant to celebrate the prosperity of the city. For the fist time, the city had been named the best city in the country to live in, and the mayor had invited a selection of invited guests to celebrate. The city had a diverse population, and as a way to pay tribute to this the feast would feature a wide range of dishes from all over the world, prepared with girls from the respective countries. The three girls had talked about volunteering to be meat for a long time, and when they saw the poster for the Sidney’s chain requesting applications from ethnically diverse girls they had signed up immediately. Heidi had German parents, Suki was born from Japanese parents and Padma had immigrated to the city from India when she was very little, along with her parents and older sister. The girls figured that they had a good chance of being selected with such diverse backgrounds. After submitting their applications and undergoing an interview, all the girls had finally received the news they were waiting for.

A little later Heidi was in her room, chatting with her friends in their messaging group about how they though they’d be prepared, when her mom knocked on her door. She made sure she heard a ‘come in’ from her daughter before she entered, in case the girl was up to other things than being on the phone with her friends. At that time though, Heidi had exhausted her sex drive at least for a little while.

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 No.21542

>>21535
Well I guess that technically Edward could complete this one, but I'd like to have a go at it myself too ;-)

 No.21545

This story, and all new ones, can now be found on Pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/novel/show.php?id=12826556

I'll continue to post stories that confines within the new rules on gurochan. This particular story will only be continued on Pixiv. If you want to read my stories be sure to follow me there. I hope to see you guys there! :-)

 No.21546

>>21545
Already favoured!

 No.21567

I've added a new chapter to this story on Pixiv. Be sure to follow me, as I'll be posting all my new stuff there. Edward Hyde is on there too, so if you like the Sidney's stories that's the place to go.

Link is in >>21545

 No.21568

>>21546
Thank you for your support!



 No.17124[Reply]

Here's my first commission! If you want one, contact me through the email attached to this post ^^
This story was uploaded a week earlier to my Patreon! https://www.patreon.com/FEH_TGE

Part 1: Losing More Than Her Way
tags: non-con, F/F, rape, beheading, necrophilia

Having charged into Honnoji Academy on her own, Ryuko Matoi intended to finally take out Nui Harime and Ragyo Kiryuin. Wearing nothing but a bedsheet she had turned into a coat, and wielding only her red Scissor Blade, the young woman demanded for the two to come out and fight her. Nui Harime obliged, and Ryuko quickly began to exchange blows with the Grand Couturier. However, Ragyo was nowhere to be seen. Ryuko wasn’t really bothered by that - figuring out she could start off with killing the spiral-haired woman. For a while, she and Nui crashed in a flurry of blows - the black-haired girl doing her hardest to finally defeat the woman who had killed her father. Finally, she saw an opening - using her coat to catch Nui as she was recoiling from one of her attacks, and pull her closer to her. Then, she impaled the girl through the chest with her scissor blade. Nui lowered her head, screaming out in pain while coughing out blood. Ah! She had done it! She finally avenged her father!

Or so Ryuko thought. “How lovely! You're more wild and cooler than ever today, Ryuko!” After giving Ryuko just a moment to think she had won, Nui just chuckled back at her - the life fibers that were a part of Nui’s body protecting her from any harm. “I’m the same as you! Life fibers also flow through my body! That makes me your soul sister!” Nui called out while jumping away from Ryuko - who just stared at her angrily. That woman… How could she hurt her for real? As the exchange student wondered that, she suddenly felt something tearing at her body from all sides. Looking down, she did it just in time to see the bedsheet she was wearing be ripped to a billion pieces - leaving her in the nude. Without it, she could see that dozens of life fibers were now stuck into various spots on her body. Even worse, the way they were pulling at her left her completely immobilized - the Scissor Blade falling out of her hands. Nui’s threads lifted her a bit higher in the air - the girl suspended spread-eagle in the air… Completely naked and helpless.

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 No.17847

Another chapter ^^
This story was uploaded a week earlier to my Patreon! https://www.patreon.com/FEH_TGE

Part 2: The Elite Four Falls
tags: non-con, M/F, rape, large insertion, strangulation

As Ryuko and Nui’s duel raged on, the Nudist Beach proceeded with their plan of rescuing Satsuki Kiryuin. The black-haired girl escaped from her holding place on her own - with the Elite Four protecting their president and retrieving her. Still, as they were taking off in one of their helicopters, they were able to see at what was happening in the Honnoji Academy’s arena. Even from a distance, they were able to watch as Nui chopped Ryuko’s head off. Upon that sight, Satsuki couldn’t help but feel grief for her sister. She knew their mother needed to be stopped, but she wasn’t expecting to lose Ryuko here. The girl was a very skilled fighter… She would have made for a good asset in their fight. The Nudists were brimming with the desire for revenge - but with the state Satsuki was in, the Four Devas insisted on retreating for now. With Ryuko gone, Satsuki was their strongest card - so, as vengeful as he was, Aikuri Mikisugi agreed to that.

Now, they had returned to the Naked Sun. Satsuki took delight in drinking a cup of tea prepared by her butler while sitting what made for a makeshift throne for her - already feeling her strength returning to her. If she was able to rest for a bit longer, the student council president would be ready to engage her foes in full force again. For now, though, she - along with her main subordinates - and the Nudist Beach’s leadership needed to discuss their strategy. Mikisugi suggested retreating to Osaka to regroup, but Satsuki expressed her doubts that they’d get the opportunity to. If Ryuko had been taken care of, she had no doubts that Ragyo would waste no time in at least trying to dispose of them next. As if on cue, Hoka Inmuta’s console began beeping in a most alarming tone. “Bad news. Something - a lot of things, actually - are heading straight for this ship, and fast.” He reported - while pointing in the general direction of where the enemies were approaching. The people’s gazes immediately moved to where he was pointing at - just in time to see Nui Harime flying towards them - with a huge cloud of COVERS flying through the air behind her.

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 No.21563

Been a while, but here's Part 3!

Part 3: Undercutting the Underachiever
Tags: non-con, F/F, futa, rape, amputation, throat slit

Satsuki charged at Nui, her extremely sharp sword and dagger both at the ready. She had thrown herself at the blonde with all the strength she had, letting her fury fuel her actions. That monster had taken her friends - and her sister! - away from her… She would be the one to finally bring her to justice! The raven-haired woman kept slicing away in Nui’s direction - eager to sink her blades into the Grand Courtier’s flesh. However, Nui seemed untouchable. Even with Satsuki’s speed being enhanced by the godrobe she was wearing, the nutjob in pink was always just a little too fast for her. The blonde graciously weaved around her, as if she was trying to tease her with her actions - and it was working quite well. Her moves only pissed Satsuki off even more - the Bakuzan’s two halves still failing to hit their target even as Satsuki’s attacks grew more and more intense.

“Awww, is that really all you can do, Satsuki? I expected more from Lady Ragyo’s precious daughter!”

Nui’s carefree expression shifting into a pouting face for the moment fueled Satsuki’s fury further.

“Guess you were just all talk in the-”

Plop!

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 No.21561[Reply]

Naruto uzumaki was surprised when a new tournament was announced for the position of hokage since he was the strongest candidate Tsunade wanted to give others the chance.the rules were simple it was a battle to the death only genitalial could be used as weapons and it was many a justsu would be cast on Naruto and all the women competing for the same position. Which would instantly turn his sperm into a deadly weapon and turn their pussy juice into a weapon too.

As Naruto entered the ring naked he saw his first opponent was Sakura and thought this was a piece of cake.

Sakura charged at him naked and splashed her womanly juices on his forearm although it stung it didn't stop Naruto from teleporting behind her and grabbing her.

"Sakura-chan looks like I'm winning this battle" Naruto stated as he plunged his dick in her asshole. She tried to twist out of his hold but only gave him more stimulation.

"Naruto let me go you're going to kill me" Naruto smiled "shouldn't have stepped in the ring if you couldn't win" Sakura tried elbowing him to get away but as soon as her elbow made contact with his ribs he came.

As massive flood of altered sperm fled into Sakura bowels and to the crowds amusement her belly increased size.

He pulled out her ass and stuck his dick into her crying mouth she had silent tears falling down her face as she glared at Naruto while being face fucked.

She glared at naruto while her belly continued to swell like a balloon until it finally stretched and cum came flooding out a hole on the side of her stomach as she tried to heal her self, Naruto stuck his hands into her wound and pulled stretching her stomach and letting her guts fall out on the arena floor.
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 No.21551[Reply]

This is a new story I'll be adding

 No.21554

The Hero stormed the demons den. His sword at the ready he reached the double doors and opened them slowly. There he saw the Orc Queen Zamanthe a tall broad woman dressed in her regal Black robes sitting on her throne looking bored.

"So you have managed to reach my castle" she gazed at him slightly amused. Zane the hero stood a little taller and gathered his courage "you will die today Orc queen" he spit back and got in his ready position.

He was fairly confident he could take her especially when she was without guards all being slain by his hand. Not to mention he was 6'2 and chiseled what could she possibly do against him.

"WAIT, before you attack hero I request a trade." The Orc queen stood up.

"What could you possibly offer me you have nothing your kingdom is falling" the Hero smugly shot back.

The Orc queen smiled wildly. "I know your secret the stuff you wish to do to women your dark side you hide from your country"

"How? How could you possibly know that" The hero paled his country looked down on those who would harm women especially in sexual acts. If they found out they would strip him of his hero's status.

The hero lowered his sword and looked up at the Orc queen "What's the deal".
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 No.21555

Zane the new Orc king. As he watched his wife body let out a steady stream of piss he sighed and pushed her pudgy body of the beds edge.


No sooner as he had done that, Orc women entered his chamber. Orcs were a big race of women and rarely were men born. They had green skin and were taller than most people the smartest orc was appointed queen cause usually they were pretty dumb.

As the Orc women walked into his chambers he questioned them.

"Where were you as your queen was humiliated and snuffed". One Orc answered for all of them.

"She ordered us out and to wait until the new Orc king was appointed" The Orc girl who answered look tough and big much taller and stronger than her queen.The stronger a orc the dumber they were. Zane was not the first human to realize this but he was the first human to see how submissive orcs can be.

"Can you clean up her stinky ass off my floors then". The Orc girl grunted and leaned down to pick up the dead body of the smaller woman. As she leaned down a stench wafted down from her ass crack.

Orcs naturally stunk and the bigger they were the worse they smelled. This was quite evident as the biggest Orc girl smelled like utter shit. As the bigger orc girl walked away with the body he stopped her.

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 No.21560

Zane pulled out of of the Orc girls back side. "What's your name" he asked

"Azula" she replied panting.
"You're my new queen" he let his hand drop to her cheek and smiled at her.

She looked elated he leaned down to her ear "choose any girl in this room and kill them any way you see fit"

Azula pointed at the smallest orc and called her over. All Orcs are completely loyal to their monarchy they would even die if they asked.

"As Your new queen I command you to use your sword to split you stomach open" the Orc girl looked absolutely terrified but didn't try to beg for her life she just obeyed the order.

Using her knife to split her stomach was so painful she didn't even try to stop her guts from spilling out as she died.

Zane was so turned on by watching his new wife order someone to die he started masturbating. Azula gazed at his dick and started using her hand on it.

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 No.21509[Reply]

I know some places (most of them I check every week).

1 Archive of our own
Fanfiction based but original tag allowed.
https://archiveofourown.org/tags/Guro/works

2 Aryion
It is not all about vore, some authors already posted here many nonvore stories.
Make sure to add tags, especially "willing" or I won't find it because so many stories each week.
https://aryion.com/g4/latest.php?type_search=Writing

3 Lolicit
I recently got access to it through loli of the day thread and don't know where exactly it is allowed to post guro stories:
in guro:
https://www.lolicit.org/forumdisplay.php?f=97
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 No.21538

>>21534
Thank you for the link. There is a little content but I will check it.

 No.21547

Gradually uploading my stories here!
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/53381041/novels

 No.21552

>>21547
Thanks, liked them.

 No.21553

>>21547
Thx.
So I know at least, where to find you. And I think, with pure written stories, you're save on Pixiv.

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 No.21556[Reply]

My name is Leonard I grew up on a Farm where there was only two families and although they were big there was only one girl my age
For years this girl would bother me. Her name was Pamela She'd make fun of me, steal from me and spread rumors about me.

I had a massive crush on Pamela and endured her bullying and eventually we both developed I grew tall and bulky while she grew a dump truck ass and thick curves.
Every since I was sixteen I would take hay into the barn often time s I'd see pam sometimes not. Today when I took it I saw her thick ass bending over the haystack

"Hey Leo didn't expect to meet you here dumbass" Pam sat down next to me she was a dark haired mexican girl with a fat ass dressed in suspenders.

"Oh hey" I rolled my eyes at her. Truthfully I been waiting for this moment, a week ago I had found Pamela's diary and how much of a submissive pig she was. Not to mention that the only reason she bullied me was because she had a crush on me and wanted me to take charge so I took charge.

As she leaned a little bit closer I thought about all the mean things she did to me and decided to cut being cordial.

"You know I have your diary right." I leaned towards are smugly as she went white. "Unless you do what I say I'm going to give it to your family, don't worry I haven't read it". I tacked on that little lie.

"I'll do anything to prevent that from getting out, I'm sorry I bullied you have mercy" she whispered back frightened.
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 No.15025[Reply]

Mall Chop


Chloe Martin liked to believe she was a good girl. 18 years old in fresh out of high school not a day of detention in her life. Copper hair worn in a bob. Just your typical good girl.

So why was she facing the Mall guillotine?

Let's go back 20 minutes, to when Chloe and her brother Simon first entered the mall that day day. She saw her brother take off into the crowd the moment they got through the door.

She turned to her friend Vanessa and said "Well he'll be 40 minutes and we can't go back home until he's done trying to pick up chicks."


Vanessa tucked a strand of black hair behind her ear and said "It's nice of you to give you a little brother a ride even when he's a little shit."

"If I waited for him to behave I never give him a ride." Chloe grumbled.

The pair walked around the Mall after returning a dress that didn't quite fit Vanessa. The two wandered into a shop that sold small scented candles

Chloe turned her nose up at a specific candle and spoke to Vanessa "Who would ever want to smell like a barbecue?" Vanessa could only shrug her shoulders.

The slightly balding man behind the counter puffed his cheeks and rumbled "Some people like barbecues.Some people met family at barbecues, some people lost family at barbecues. Some want to remember them." he angrily glared.

Chloe never one for a confrontation tried to stammer out an apology but could not take the man's furious gaze.

Vanessa seeing her friends trouble simply grabbed her hand and walked her to the exit accidentally bumping into the man on the way out.

"Sorry." she quietly let out and the two tried to make good their escape.

Suddenly the man shouted "Hey are you trying to rob me!"

The pair turned quickly shaking their heads and wondering what he was talking about as a crowd started to look on

The man stalked forward and shoved his hand into Chloe's purse and pulled out a bottle scented candle. "You didn't buy that!"

Chloe looked shocked because she did not buy that nor did she steal that but before she could say anything a Mall Cop that had been been hanging around nearby to between them and inquired "Carl this this girl tried to steal from you?"

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 No.15033

>>15030
Honestly when I wrote, edited and posted this I had been awake for more than 30 hours straight and may have been little loopy.

Plus it's the second story I wrote in over 20 years. The first being the Black Widow one I posted earlier than this and wrote in the same sleep-deprived haze.

 No.15058

I LOVE IT

 No.21510

bump for sequel? i came to save it, but she's 18! lol

 No.21544

>>21510
I'm not sure about a sequel, it's a pretty self contained story.

I haven't really written much else, though your comment means a lot and is giving me a refreshed drive to write.

Unfortunately idea's mostly involve mid-to-late teens so i don't know where I can post them if I ever get the time and focus to write them.

 No.21550

>>21544

Turn's out I was wrong.

>>21549

Sequels in the works



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Robert gritted his teeth to hold back, to make it last as long as possible but he made the mistake of looking down and seeing her bright adoring eyes and lost control. With a grunt and moan he felt the spasm as his seed rushed into her eagerly waiting mouth.

“Guuaaahhh, Oh Mell, you have gotten so good at that.”


Mellanie gulped down her treat and pulled back from his cock while still sucking hard, causing a popping sound at it pulled free from her lips.

“Am I as good as Aunt Stephie?” she asked looking up into her father’s eyes.

“Easily!” he answered.

With a bright Smile the happy 10-Year-old jumped to her feet and hugged her father, kissing him on the lips with an innocent joy that belied her activity of only a few moments before.

“I’m gonna tell mom. She will be so amazed!” with that the little girl ran to the kitchen. Robert groaned and got up to follow, not really looking forward to the coming conversation with his wife of 14 years.

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 No.21415


Part 6



Robert watched through the observation window as they brought Mellie in., she seemed very limp and wasn’t moving.

“Is she ok? She isn’t moving.”

“Oh, don’t worry sir, they’ve just given it something to keep it relaxed during the procedure.”

Robert bristled at the way Mr. Daniels kept referring to Mellie as if she was just an object, but there seemed no point to getting upset now that things had begun.


He watched as his baby girl was strapped to the table and covered with wires. He was reassured of her well being when the monitors near her sprung to life showing what appeared to be heartbeat, respiration and other reading he assumed meant she was alive and doing well.
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 No.21421

>>21414
Very intriguing continuation :D Although given what just happened, it sounds like the man who did the original inspection was just having a bit of fun with how thoroughly he examined her body? :-P

 No.21429

Imma have nightmares about Dentists tonight, Thanks.
But in all honest twas interesting.

 No.21447

Well, I wonder which design was chosen by her father…

 No.21540

I hope this story gets to be finished somewhere else too. I love it very much!!



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