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>>25297
well you named yourself AI LOL
but at this time you can expect accusations of using AI because probably everyone uses it :)

For example this kind of description is hard to follow:

>Spreading his fingers wide, he pulled out an arm long section of her intestines with the same suction sound her sister had produced and went on to inspecting it for a hidden USB key.
here it was unclear what exactly how did he pull those intestines?

Only later when being aware what happens I can guess that he somehow tore her large intestine and pulled her guts out through the hole

>He looked at the two teens whose holes were gaping and who both had a coil of intestines dangling out of their inverted asshole.

If intestines are puled out though ther ases they can't be gaping maybe you mens their pusies are gaping?

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>>25298
I guess I do indeed lend myself to this accusation by choosing this handle. Oh well…

Ah, yeah, I see what you mean. I did indeed struggle with writing this part. I even had to rewrite it, because it was initially even more obscure.
I wasn't fully happy with it and it visibly shows. I think I probably just need practice describing these kind of things. And as you said, to not shy away from spending more time on describing it.

Let's try to clarify.
Both girls basically undergo the same treatment, and the main differences are in the details of how the react and how he goes about inflicting it on them. But the basic principle is they have stolen a USB key and are refusing to say what they did with it, so he's gonna search every place they could possibly have hidden it on their person, from the least invasive to the most invasive.

- First come their clothes and mouth.
- Then he searches their pussy. Here he's thorough enough that they're left completely gaping.
- He then moves on to their assholes. This time, he fists them and prolapses them.
The intestines are of course still attached to their rectum, but are poking out of their asshole. He hasn't ripped them out yet.
- After having fisted both girls in both their pussies and assholes, they are both left with a gaping vagina and a prolapsed asshole. Out oh hole, he has the stomach and the rest of their intestines left to check, as well as their uterus and bladders.
- He grabs a knife and cuts around their assholes so that the intestines are detached from it. for one oh them, however, he's pissed, so he just lops off a section of intestines to get the same result.
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>>25303
Looks like I got it mostly right then.

Let's see how the next part will turn out :)

Can't wait for the next chapter to be released.

>>25311

I initially planned to release it this weekend, but I've decided to rework a few things on the next chapter, so it might be a few days.
Especially since I've been writing the start of another story in parallel.

It appears that asstr.xyz doesn't have any of Eficient's works, unfortunately

But it is on archive.org

https://web.archive.org/web/20210617002203/https://www.asstr.org/~Eficient/emilys%20journey.htm

Glad to know someone still likes my stories, and no, I haven't uploaded my site to asstr.xyz, I should, bu life has been pretty rough this last couple of years…

>>25264
Oh no, that sucks to hear. Been a fan of your work since you started posting here / on dolcettgirls. Anything we can do to help? I tried emailing you at eficientcollection@gmail.com but the email address seems to be dead now.

>>25290
I lost that email when I had to take down the website, I have a new one, but its probably easier to use discord, my user name is eficient if you want to chat

x21 was written by Cuckold Wimp John

X-21

Written by Cuckold Wimp John


My name is Tom Carter. I am 35, slim and in pretty good shape, and not
bad looking either, so I've been told. I married my wife Emily, who is
two years younger than me, nine years ago when we were in our twenties.
We have always led a fairly average life, I would say, up until a year
ago when we finally saved up enough money to put a nice down payment on
a home in the suburbs, which was something we always wanted to do. By
the way, my wife Emily is a real knockout looker. She is short and
petite, but has a truly great ass and luscious legs too, in spite of her
being only 5'2". Guys are always giving her second glances, and strong
ones at that, whenever we go out in public. We also have two kids, and
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No, that's definitely not it, but thanks for looking! With x21 I'm referring to the old dolcett estates website. It was a story on there. It's not on the wayback machine as far as I've found, unfortunately, and I have no other idea how to find it

Chapter 2
While making breakfast in the kitchen, I could barely hear the toddler in the basement. What I could hear was the slut babbling to the puppies. After my sleep, I expected that she would have picked her favorite puppy. I cooked a cheese & bacon omelet and shared it with Eve. I hoped that the smell of the meal would find its way to the child.

Finally, I was upstairs with Eve and preparing for bed. I removed my clothes and lay down on my king-size bed. I snapped my fingers, and Eve did as she was trained and jumped on the bed with her head on my thigh close to my cock. My cock was half hard, but Eve would fix that shortly. I knew that it would only take one word "suck" for my Mastiff to start working my 6-inch, thin cock with her wide slippery tongue.

Eve always started with nice long licks that she reached down to my balls, and up it was as if she wanted to taste what I had fucked last. Next, she would gobble my entire cock into her doggie mouth. Eve would move her tongue and head around until I commanded her to stop or I’d cum into her maw. This night I wanted to fuck her ass mainly because wanted the toddler to clean my cock of dog shit when I woke up. I gave her the command to stop.

My next command was "Eve ASS". With this command, she would shift over and lay on her belly, her tail pulled to the side as if she were in season. I reached into the headboard, where I kept sex toys and lube. I used Astro-glide on my cock, and then I crawled behind her. I took note while looking at her asshole; it was nice and crusty with her poop. I knew that would leave some lovely remains the toddler would clean from my 6-inch puppy raper in the morning. I angled my cock to her ass and pressed against her pucker, and she was clamped down tight.
I knew how to fix that. I took my fist, punched the dog's side, and yelled her name. Like magic, she loosened up enough that I slid into her anus. Oh god, it was so hot and sticky. As I started fucking her ass, I could smell her ass, that was somewhat spicy today. Having my dog's poop rank is a good thing, as it will make the cock filthy and stinky with poop.

I grabbed her fur and rode her, picturing of all the ways I would fuck, torture and break Sasha over the next few months. 10 min after lay pipe in my bitch's ass, I knew I was approaching the point of no return. I abruptly stopped to save a nice load for tomorrow's fun. When I pulled my cock free of her clenching ass. Post too long. Click here to view the full text.

that AI dungeon site is great but will copy all the info you create even with privacy settings, so NSFW CYOA games are extremely rare.

>>14819 >>14219
Use Novel AI instead you have to pay but its private and the quality is better than a dungeon's aging broken systems

Going to be a while before someone makes something similar to Novel AI, but not with the future-aggressive paywall. Did I mention the guy who create that site was from the Guardian but was fired for layoffs and supported the paywall nonsense we all know the Guardian constantly uses?

>>22053
spyware made by kikes.
use novelai or local ai instead.
aidungeon devs are confirmed to look through your stories

I think I had tried once but doesn't really have a good concept or should it be focusing on mechanic over 'pick this to live'. What do you have in mind OP?

Chapter 2: The Plan

The next day, Terry, Billy, and Matt began their stalking of Amy. They shadowed her after school, watched her from a distance as she hung out with her friends at the park, and even managed to catch a glimpse of her in her bedroom, thanks to a pair of binoculars they'd pilfered from a nearby store.

As the days turned into weeks, Terry, Billy, and Matt became more and more obsessed with Amy. They would often stay up late into the night, talking about her, fantasizing about what they'd do to her, and planning their next move.

One evening, as they sat in the dark, Terry suggested they kidnap Amy. He believed that if they could keep her locked up and away from everyone else, they could have her all to themselves. Billy and Matt were hesitant at first, but Terry's persistence wore them down. They agreed to go through with the plan.

Amy had just gotten off the bus when Matt approached her, pretending to be lost and asking for directions. She stopped to help him, and as she bent over to point out the way, Terry and Billy emerged from the shadows, grabbing her arms and pulling her into a nearby alley.

Amy struggled, but the three boys were stronger than she could have ever imagined. They gagged her, bound her hands and feet, and shoved her into the back of a van.

As they drove away, Amy could only imagine what horrors awaited her. Her mind raced with thoughts of her family, her friends, and whether they would ever find her alive again.

Chapter 3: The Captivity

As Amy struggled and fought against her captors, Terry, Billy, and Matt managed to subdue her. They quickly realized that their initial plan of kidnapping and restraining her without any sort of drug or sedative would be difficult to maintain.

With a sense of urgency, they searched their hideout for something that could knock Amy out. They stumbled upon a small vial of a clear, odorless liquid. They had acquired it from a shady character in the underworld, who claimed it was a potent truth serum.

As they hesitated, they decided to take a risk. They caught Amy off-guard, forcing her to swallow the contents of the vial. Within moments, she slumped to the floor, her eyes glazing over and her body going limp.

With a sense of relief, they dragged her into the abandoned house and locked her in a windowless room, leaving her with only the dim light of a flickering bulb. They knew that the drug they gave her was a powerful concoction, designed to keep her unconscious for as long as it took them to figure out their next move.

As the hours ticked by, Amy's breaths grew shallow, and her body became still. The drug worked its magic, keeping her in a state of suspenseful slumber, her mind lost in a haze of uncertainty.

As the boys strip the unconscious Amy and tie her up to a table, they can't help but admire her naked body in detail. Their eyes roam over her every curve, their hands trembling with a mixture of excitement and fear. They tell themselves that they're doing this for their twisted pleasure, that they're merely exploring her body in the name of their twisted experiment.

Amy's breasts are full and supple, the nipples erect and slightly pink due to the cool temperature of the room. They are a smooth, round delight, begging to be touched and tasted. As their eyes linger on her breasts, they move downward, taking in the soft, supple skin of her stomach, leading to the treasure that lies below.
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Great work! I really liked that piece

Love this. Exactly my kink

awesome

Good i could help with a complete story, Azalel. :-)

love this story!

Everyone likes a good hunt!

Great story!

Not sure if Otakuist is still around, but anybody up for completing the rest of this story?

I know this second one isn't exactly a school scenario. I honestly should've named this thread "Stories From The Office of Termination", or something along those lines.

Awesome again. I’d love to read any more you write or have written.

>>20536
Wow that second story was super-hot! I love the idea of a celebrity volunteering for the publicity!

Oooh lovely