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 No.21239[Reply]

For Missy Payne: >>21127

Quality Assurance

“Okay, bring in the first Resource.”

Alex found herself shoved into a stark, brightly-lit white room. She looked around and immediately tried to cover her naked body as she realized she wasn’t alone in the room—there was a man and a woman seated at a small table by one side of the room.

“No need for that, we’ll be seeing everything in a minute anyway,” said the man, gesturing at her hands. “I’m Eric, from the QA department, and this is Tina, one of our software engineers. Can you tell us your name?”

“Alex,” she responded, not moving her hands. She took in the rest of the room. It was pretty bare, with a small bed set up against one of the walls, and what appeared to be an extremely lifelike mannequin standing in the corner. There were several cameras set up on tripods pointing towards the bed

“Okay, Alex, we’re going to be using your holes today to test out one of our new pleasure robots. Just a heads up, this is pretty much alpha quality hardware, so there’s probably gonna be a few bugs. Just try to tell us as accurately as you can how everything feels, okay?”

Alex nodded trepidatiously, biting her lip. Down in the Human Resources storage department, she’d seen Resources come back from testing robots like these with looks of dazed bliss on their faces multiple times. Of course, other times, resources came back damaged or just didn’t come back at all. It all depended on how close to production ready the bot was.
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 No.21242

Fuck me this is hot.

 No.21271

I love it!~
–Ms. Alex Payne

 No.21272

>>21271
Yay! Glad you enjoyed. :)

 No.21536

so hot <3


 No.21264[Reply]

As you may have guessed from the title, this story is a guro take on the mobile game Fate/Grand Order. This first chapter is pretty much an adaption of the prologue of the game. Initially I just wanted to do a quick summary so I could get to the meat of the story, but it kept ballooning and getting away from me so it may be a little more rough then I would expect the rest of the story to be, as well as also being a little low on sexy elements. If you find you're not having a good time with the first chapter you might still give later ones a try.

This story was pretty much inspired by reading M's Fire Emblem Heroes story. His story seemed quite good, but the experience was somewhat damped by being wholly unfamiliar with any of the characters, so I thought I would write a story based on the gacha game I am familiar with. When I was reading M's story I also found myself often checking the Fire Emblem wiki, so I was thinking I would link the wiki pages of relevant involved characters at the beginning of each chapter, to aid anyone who wants to read without knowing the source material.
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 No.21295

Well then…

The first chapter, though it would better be called a prologue with the current second chapter counting as the first, made me feel like I'm reading one of my own very first attempts at writing. Your experience of course makes you able to do a much better job with words, but the problems with storytelling are all the same. All stemming from it being a retelling, I think.

First: huge exposition dump. And totally out of place. The easiest thing that can be done to improve this would be not to have the twins fall asleep at the briefing and put all the info about Chaldea and its mission there. Even if the reader would still have to read through the same boring lecture, at least it would be an actual in-universe lecture and if the reader gets bored, at least they feel the same as the characters. Well, I guess technically it is currently also in-universe as it's Mash telling it, but it feels artificially put in this place of the story when there was even a dedicated briefing where all of this was already told if only the twins didn't fall asleep at the start (you can still make them fall asleep after you've already conveyed all the important info, so that they can still then be kicked out and all). Another thing this would accomplish would be separating the pieces of exposition so that all the stuff related to Chaldea can go in the briefing and Mash can then only tell about her being a demi-servant. Of course ideally the size of the exposition dump should also be reduced as much as possible. Are all the details about how chaldeas works and that its not enough by itself but also needs something called sheba? I bet even the original authors have no idea how all of this works, they've just put a bunch of mysterious words together, so why should we care. The important thing is only that it shows the incineration of humanity and the characters now have to stop that.

Second: rushing through things, some of which call for more detailed description, others should be cut completely. Which I think stems from the issue I wanted to list as third, but now that I think of it, they're mostly the same, and that is: you're not writing a story, but retelling a game/anime. There is no point in the whole "they fought some enemies and gained some exp so they then fought stronger enemies and defeated them too and finally they fought even stronger enemies but by that time they were leveled up enough to defeat those too… oh, and among Post too long. Click here to view the full text.

 No.21301

>>21295

Thanks for taking the time to give such detailed feedback.

I agree with pretty much most of what you said, for some reason while writing some of the details seemed more important than they do now. The first rough draft didn't really explain CHALDEAS, but it seemed necessary to explain why Olga Marie was so upset when it had turned red, and Mash's explanation seemed the only place where it would fit. And when I was explaining one thing it seemed natural to explain others. Now I agree that it should have been explained during Olga Marie's briefing, it would give even more weight to her horror if she had spoken about it with barely withheld excitement earlier, and things like SHEBA could have been left out entirely. Maybe SHEABA's explanation is where the protagonists could have dozed off, hinting to the reader know there is more to know without piling on too much exposition. My initial plan was to have three blocks of exposition, after the rayshift from Mash, from Dr. Roman after establishing contact, and from Da Vinci after returning. I thought interrupting with exposition once might be less painful, but it might have been better the first way.

You're right that I could have explained more about the twin's situation. Grand Order has a handful of Servants that are two characters sharing a single Spirit Origin (Castor and Pollux might have even been the impetus for me to finally finish the first chapter), and I suppose my thinking was that is was a similar situation, just as a Master instead of a Servant. They probably applied for a single room, either as a couple or sibling roommates. Whether or not they were open about the other side of their relationship could go either way. The idea of siblings sharing a servant isn't a totally new idea to Fate, though the other instance utilized unique sorcery and had the servant split into a good side and an evil side, each sister controlling one. https://typemoon.fandom.com/wiki/Edelfelt_sisters

Mash's scene at the end of Chapter 2 was more intended to be kind of an epilogue rather than it's own full scene. The focus of the story is more the guro aspect and that scene was pretty vanilla, just establishing a sexual relationship between Mash and the twins going forward. Though I can see where you'rPost too long. Click here to view the full text.

 No.21303

>>21301

Why do I forget to add my name so often?

 No.21307

> I don't know if I'll try rewriting the first chapter, I'm just kind of relieved to finally move it out of the WIP folder after two years.

Good point. That's why I was saying maybe you shouldn't have tried to explain every detail of the setting to the newcomers, and instead focus on what's different and important in your own story. Maybe that wouldn't have taken two years. But what's done is done, no point in turning back now that you've finally gotten done with the prologue and got to the actual story. I bet no reader would prefer you reworking the prologue for another two years over seeing the continuation hopefully soon.

I may be wrong judging from just one chapter, but if your story is going to focus more on Servants killing each other in various ways inside Chaldea for the sake of power ups, rather than on saving the humanity, then the original story events can be skipped entirely and just mentioned like "after the events of such and such singularity such and such servants have joined Chaldea… so let's see how we can have fun with them now", or maybe a character telling another character "remember how you've used such and such technique in that battle back then? Wouldn't it be fun to try use it for fun?" and readers familiar with the original story would be pleased with recognizing the reference, while for readers unfamiliar that suggestion by itself would serve as enough introduction into that character having that technique.

 No.21500

Happy to hear that I've inspired you to get started on writing a series of your own ^^ I'm not familiar with FGO myself, only watched the UBW anime as a reference for some comms earlier this year, but I'll make sure to give it a read ^^

That said, there already exists a pretty good FGO-oriented story by Deathstalker, here: http://depravityrepository.org/forums/showthread.php?tid=1180 Not saying this to discourage you, just pointing out some scenarios from that verse that were already done by another author that you might want to avoid ^^


 No.21069[Reply]

Pt 1

“Anything special happening today, Dad?” Jenny asked, helping to raise the shutters and put the signs outside her dad’s butcher shop like she did every day during the school holidays. It looked like it was going to be a very sunny day and she had a favour to ask so was doing her best to be extra helpful.

“Not much that I can remember…” He flicked through the large desk-diary and checked that day’s date. “There’s a lady bringing her daughter in at eleven for a straight-forward slaughter and clean so that shouldn’t take too long and I have a couple of appraisals booked for this afternoon but otherwise a pretty regular day. Why?”

“Umm, well some of my friends are going to the village fair this afternoon and asked me to go with them so I was wondering if I could have the afternoon off?” Although, at ten years old, Jenny was too young to help with any of the actual butchering or even minding the shop, she made a great advert! It had even been her idea to begin with when she was bored of sitting in the back with her comics one warm day and, since that day when she was seven years old, it had become a fairly regular thing on days when she was not at school for the cute little blonde to stand naked outside the shop handing out leaflets to passers-by and advertising the fact that her dad’s shop specialised in girl-meat.

A lot of her friends found it strange that she did this so willingly and often asked if she didn’t mind the way boys and men looked at her and whether she was worried that somebody might ask to buy her. She would always laugh and explain that men that looked at her that way were just silly but the attention was fun and that, if anyone asked to buy her as at least three people would every day she was there, her dad would tell them that she was from his own private stash and not for sale!

“Sure thing, honey.” He smiled at her warmly. “Hope you have fun! You know what, you could actually save me a job if you wouldn’t mind?”

“Sure!” She grinned delightedly. “Thank you, Daddy! What is it?”

“I promised the organisers I’d donate some girl-burgers,” he explained, “it’s for a good cause and it’s good publicity for the shop! Plus it’s not like they cost me much, just the time it takes to make them, really!” Henny understood that the burgers, while tasty, were made from the scraps and off-cuts from the girls her dad butchered, the parts that would never sell on their own. It was stillPost too long. Click here to view the full text.
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 No.21490

>>21489


I wanted to add another thing I noticed, which is this "announcement" is NOT on the front page and is NOT in the rules.

Nothing adds up.

 No.21492

>>21490
I think this is again that spammer's doing. In feedback thread mods already solved cp spam problem and I hope this sticky ban message would disappear.

 No.21493

I agree that this sudden loli ban sounds quite fishy.

 No.21494

Let's hope :)

 No.21498

Just to be safe, we should refrain from posting until this all clears up.


 No.21482[Reply]

Part 1 - Easter Snuff-Bunny

“Do I really have to be naked?” nineteen year old Suzie whined. “Can’t I wear a bikini or something?”

“No, sweetie.” Her father Aaron chuckled, “We want to put on a good show for the neighbours don’t we? And anyway, it’s not like you have anything to be ashamed of with that tight little body of yours!”

“Then can I at least get rid of the ears?” she pleaded, “I feel so stupid!”

“You can’t be an Easter Bunny without ears!” Aaron pointed out, “Which reminds me, turn around!” The naked teen rolled her eyes and turned her back on her father. She felt something furry being pushed into the top of her butt-crack. It obviously has some kind of sticky pad or tape on it as it pulled on her skin uncomfortably. “There! Now you have a proper bunny tail too!”

It was the Saturday before Easter Sunday and the neighbourhood committee had decided to hold their regular party on the Saturday rather than the Sunday as many people would be out of town visiting family on the day itself and they didn’t want anyone to miss out on the fun. Aaron Jacobson was hosting and had roped in his daughter Suzie to assist with the entertainment. It could hardly be claimed that she was a willing participant but neither did she protest all that much, knowing that, short of running away from home and probably ending up getting raped and murdered on the streets, she didn’t really have a lot of choice in the matter.

“Hey! Looking good!” Her twin brother Brandon teased as he walked through the living room on his way to grab a drink out of the fridge. “If you like emo chicks that is!”

“Everyone prefers goth chicks over hippies!” she retorted, making sure to emphasise the word “goth”. Despite their many apparent differences, the twins were far more alike than either would care to admit. Both were metal-heads although Suzie was a goth while Brandon favoured the grunge look. Both had been born with light brown hair but while Brandon, who was in a band with a couple of his friends, let his grow wild and unkempt, Suzie kept hers straightened and dyed jet black. Even today, stark naked apart from a pair of bunny-ears and a stick-on tail, she was wearing black eyeliner and dark red lipstick. Brandon was trying to grow a beard on his chin but, being six months shy of his 20th birthday, it wasn’t going so well. Suzie had decided to shave all over for the occasion figuring that, if she was going to be humiliated and killPost too long. Click here to view the full text.

 No.21483

Part 2 - An Explosively Good BBQ

Suzie had not lasted much longer Saturday afternoon – the mental and physical stress, not to mention the trauma to her young body, had tired her right out. She has excused herself from the party, taken a long hot bath then gone to bed. It was Sunday morning before she awoke, feeling sore and aching but no more than after a good gym session. Sitting no the toilet, she heard a metallic clink of something hitting the bowl and realised that she must have passed the explosive device she’d been told to swallow. She wasn’t going to ask her dad if he wanted it back and she certainly didn’t feel like fishing around for it but it did get her thinking. Her dad had said that all the devices used in her challenge the day before had been adapted from his military projects at work so what was the little explosive supposed to do? Were you supposed to trick and enemy into swallowing it then detonate it once you were a safe distance away or something? She resolved to sneak into her dad’s study and find out.

As luck would have it, when she came out of the bathroom, Suzie realised that her parents had already left for Church, leaving her to sleep, and she was alone in the house. She quickly dressed in black leggings and a black crop top and went to investigate. In her dad’s study she found not only a whole case of the shiny metal pellets but a small detonation device with each. Clearly the one that had been inside her had been specially adapted for the purpose, to explode on a timer, but the rest seemed to be unmodified. The manual with them made for very interesting reading indeed and gave her an idea. She returned to her bedroom and started to think through the plan.

Putting on makeup with her left hand was trickier than she’d thought it might be but she was damned if she was not going to spend her last day or so fully expressing herself. She knew that she wouldn’t be allowed to wear any for the barbecue but she figured that by that point it would be the least of her worries. With a pair of scissors, she trimmed the burned ends off her long black hair. It was not perfect but she made a reasonable job of it. Looking out her bedroom window she saw that her dad and his friends had clearly been busy while she was sleeping.

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 No.21495

nice story

 No.21496

>>21495
Thanks :)


 No.21450[Reply]

Due to its sensitive content, I decided to release this chapter on gurochan only, for fans of the Sarahs Epic Life Series, here is one containing Loli snuff and Scat, and possibly more with positive user feedback. Enjoy….

Please Baby… said 25 year old and caucasian Liz as she pleaded with Sarah. "no, I just…. why baby?" Sarah asked quizzidly. "Because I want to try something new!" Liz pouted

Sarahs pussy twinged at the thought, but could she bring herself to do what her lover asked? She had done many things the past few years that people thought were vile, but this…

Sarah was about to refute Liz again when something broke inside of her.
Ok fine, but just three of them, then well see about more. Sarah said with a cute face. Liz clapped her hands together gleefully and passionately kissed Sarah. Tonight was going to be something special!
"What about that one?" Liz asked while casually masturbating under her skirt.

Sarah nodded as her eyes dwelled on a six year old baptist girl named Laura, she had her mothers ass and had cute black curly hair.

What about that one too? Sarah said pointing at a 4 year old skinny girl. "Toilet" Liz answered.
Sarah blushed at the thought, and grabbed the atomizer, tonight was going to be so much fun!!

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 No.21471

Damnn.. yes please continue!

 No.21491

If the Anon who replied to this or anyone else wants more loli after the posted ulupdate banning loli works of art, email sarahcortez@protonmail.com And ill send ya direct updates, you can also find subsequent chapters on aryion in the underage section or lolicit in the guro catagory.

I will still post non loli updates to sarahs epic life in the other thread, and as always, have fun!


 No.21439[Reply]

I've made it back to Gurochan with content. Here are a few Shorts I wrote as exercises.
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(Additional Tag(s): Necksnap)
Smashed Out

It was the final match for the Tourney and down to the last stocks. An inkling, wearing a Zero suit from a friend was in bad shape. She was out of ink, and every attempt to refill got her hit for her troubles. The last one, with a mighty tree itself, had left her gasping. Even worse, she had lost track of the villager she was fighting. She attempted to go for ink again, only for a strong arm to grip her neck. If she were in her right mind, the squid form would have been an easy out, but a few pulls on her neck in quick succession snapped the idea away before she could use it. Then she pulled harder. The inkling lost control of herself with a crack and was gently lowered to the ground. Her empty splattershot slipped from her hands.

The villager looked over the now dead inkling with the smallest smirk as she removed the inkling's other personal effect, a bandana that hid her face, or more accurately, her fear. Small beads of sweat covered the inklings face as the villager Pocketed the body. After all, Master Hand could get a new one for her, and Villager's house was looking rather sparse.
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 No.21441

(Additional Tag(s): Necksnap)

A True Hero Wins

Chara panted as the weapon her hand slipped from her grip. She was on her last legs on this run, and Undyne wasn't showing many openings. The twisted child huffed and charged again, only for a spear to render her arm worthless. She still kept running, intent on shoulder-checking the fish woman off the bridge, only for Undyne to grab her and slam her into the bridge with a single movement. Chara tried to stand, only for Undyne to pin her by the neck under her boot. Chara stopped struggling right then with a smirk, as Undyne applied pressure. With a quick snap, Chara's body fell limp. Undyne was still enraged by the tyke and punted her lifeless corpse off the bridge into the ravine below.

Then time reset.

 No.21442

(Additional Tag(s): Necksnap, Impalement)

Beach Mishap

The blonde struggled fiercely as the black girl had her bound by the neck. Both girls were about 9, but while the blonde was a fashion whore getting the next trends, the black girl studied both hand-to-hand and weapon combat, and it showed. The blonde could do little but flail as the black girl looked down.

"What was that about my bikini again?" The black girl asked.

"Take off my-GACK!" The blonde started to make her foolish demand again, before being silenced by a flex of the black girl. A small pop resounded on the beach as the blonde twitched and spasmed, not dead, but unable to move under her own power. The black girl looked her over.

"Thought so." The black girl start, before seeing the blonde with her middle finger up.

Calmly, and without a word, she stabbed a finger into the blonde where her left lung was, causing it to fill with blood.

 No.21443

(Additional Tag(s): Necksnap, Mature)

Rejected

Berri continued to reject Lola's advances, to the latter's dismay, and not even alcohol could change her mind. Lola, starting to be more than a little annoyed by this, stole a kiss from Berri only to be pushed off. Unfortunately for the dim, blonde squirrel girl, Lola was a capable athlete, and her patience was gone. With a single swift motion, she leapt onto Berri's shoulders, slamming Berri's head into her crotch and pinning her to the bar. Berri attempted to swing Lola off, only to give the bunny enough momentum to swing around Berri's neck in a vice grip, snapping it loud enough to instantly sober her up.

Berri spasmed in between Lola's thighs as her mouth attempted to move, only serving to tease Lola more. Her drink spilled from her hands as she went slack, no longer having the ability to resist the bunny's more carnal desires.

 No.21444

(Additional Tag(s): Neck Snap)

Rodent Removal

Peach had invited Amy Rose to a special sparring ring outside her castle for a little girl time. Amy, being rather desperate to talk with someone that would be around for more than a few minutes, accept the offer, thinking it would be a nice way to let off steam. Little did she know, Peach was planning something a bit more sinister.

Peach met Amy outside the castle in her sports gear and with two pieces of cake. Handing Amy one, she ate her own chatting with the hedgehog about their love lives and walking to the ring. As Peach shared some nice info about her time with Mario her cousin time with Luigi, Amy felt herself becoming more pissed as she spoke about her failures. By the time Amy was at the ring, she was completely livid. Too livid in fact to notice the subtle taste difference in her slice or the extra bit of red in Peach's. She just had violence on the mind.

The two steps into the rings and Peach offered a handshake to keep up appearances, only for Amy to swing her Piko Piko hammer at the princess. "Why do you have to have all the luck, huh?!"

Peach, for her part, was able to dodge the wild swings that came for her, moving back towards the ring's barrier. "Maybe, it's just I know what boys like?" She said with a wink. Amy threw her hammer at the Princess, only for the weapon to sail out of the arena.

With the biggest threat out of the way, Peach lunged forward, tackling Amy to the ground. Amy attempted to brace, but found her strength waning even more than it should have. Not to mention, Peach felt faster and stronger than when they met at the Games.

"What are you doing, ya crazy Blonde?" Amy sputtered out as Peach took her to the ground.
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 No.21470

(Additional Tag(s): Dragon Ball, OC, NeckSnap)

Redeployment

Sashimi's scouter pinged for redeployment, an odd occurrence, but not one she could really argue with, as it sent her off as her comrades started to drop off from her scouter. She ended up sent to a nearish unmarked planet with little life around, her mission to investigate the readings here, and remove the threat if there was one. Using her scanner to check her surrounding yielded no results, and she tsked, thinking herself alone on the backwater rock.

But she wasn't, and if she could sense energy, she'd have know a putty-like woman had come near. As it stood, she was completely unprepared for the long, green tail that came at her from one of the random boulders around. A Majin woman had had gone through the planet and destroyed most of the population before being attracted by Sashimi's touchdown. "What have here?" Was her only warning, as the tail snaked around her neck from behind and tightly coiled around the grunt. Sashimi started to struggle as she came face to face with her green-skinned opponent, unable to flail out of the death grip and forced to stare at someone that, frankly, was a bit more of a beauty than she.

Beyond the green skin, the Majin was built like an amazon, with a filled out chest, and an ass you could bounce a zeni off of. Silver hair flowed down her head in twin tails, and her eyes, thought terrifying in their cold stare, had an allure about them with their black sclera on blue eyes. Sashimi started to struggle with a massive (for her) Ki discharge, breaking the grip to ready for a fight. The Majin woman barely seemed fazed as only dust kicked up, accidentally giving her the advantage. "Muu like you. Muu wants to play."

With that Sashimi could barely move to block as Muu disappeared from both sight and scan. A high punch at her face nearly shattered her arm, and a low kick stole the wind from her gut. Sashimi attempted to throw out a blast in response, but it went wide, as Muu came from behind once more. "Muu bored with you now."With that, the Majin woman lifted Sashimi up and piledrived her behind them. Sashimi was lucky enough to tilt herself enough to not immediately break her neck or back, but with the pain she was feeling and the excess of energy she spent, she wasn't getting back up anytime soon.

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 No.21430[Reply]

I didn't want to make two separate threads for somewhat related ideas, but does anyone have recommendations or know stories with this type of content? It feels like a rarely in the genre.

I just read "Before Exams" by DarkSideOfTheSun and really loved it. Very unique and twisted approach to brain content.

As for the eye content, skullfucking is definitely up there with it, but also eye removal.

 No.21462

The girl was led to the restaurant's dining hall, knowing what will happen but unable to protest, and sat in front of a table. Behind it sat a smiling woman, her plate empty. Pain pierced her head as a circle was cut into her skull.

She looked the girl in the eyes as her skull's top was removed. Spatula-like tools were plunged into her head and lifted her brain into the open air, draining the terror from her face.

It was placed on her plate. She took a slice, savoring it. Many rich ate human meat. She ate people.


 No.20555[Reply]

"Art in the Attic"

(Different Chapters will have slightly different content, but generally will be F/f, non-consensual, snuff, water sports, teen)

Here's something I've been writing lately. I'm still not fully sure how long it'll be, but I'm guessing about 6-8 Chapters (around 6k words each). It's about a teenage girl named Conny, who encounters an older, supernatural woman named Autumn. Autumn gives Conny power to do bizarre, cruel and deadly things to people the latter doesn't like, and especially uses it against fellow students from her all girls school.

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``(F-Solo, f, f, non-consensual, masturbation, melting, snuff, teen, water sports)``

`==(Chapter 1: "Melted Goo With a Side of Milk" - Pt. A)==

Conny and her friend Karen were getting stuff out of their lockers, finishing up an after hours drivers education class, at their public (but all-girls school) in suburban Sioux Falls, South Dakota. They had recently both turned 14 years old, which meant that right there in the Mount Rushmore State, the two could soon get a permit.

"So this weekend, you wanna come over? We can go and -" Conny, the freckled, pony-tailed redhead began to say, as they both were closing their lockers.
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 No.20963

An awesome read, looking forward to chapter 3!

 No.21056

More plz!

 No.21267

Hoping to read more!

 No.21278

I repent of saying this story is evil.

 No.21445

Have her shove someone up her butt and kill em that way!


 No.5404[Reply][Last 50 Posts]

It's been a while since my last /lit/ thread was gone, so I think that maybe it's time to finally revive it. Like, maybe new people appeared here after all that time who might find my sotires to their enjoyment, or maybe some of the old folk want to reread some of my stories and never saved them to their hard drive (I know I always do that: don't save the story I like and then curse myself for it when the thread is gone).

And since this thread is aimed at new people too, I'll start with an introduction.
So, I'm Aoi Hikari from Russia. I write stories, photoshop pictures (see the Alteration thread on /g/) and sometimes translate them (see the Translations thread on /g/). My favorite charachters are Ayanami Rei from Evangelion, Kinomoto Sakura from Cardcaptor Sakura, so you'll find them more often in my works then other charachters from other fandoms. My favorite kind of guro is consensual and even casual, so this is what you can expect from my works.
I tend to come up with a lot of ideas but never turn them into actual stories. I often discuss them in this thread. Firstly, in hope that will help me shape it better in my mind and eventually actually write it (it rarely happens, but not entirely hopeless). Secondly, in hope that someone else might be inspired by those ideas and write something on one of them it or not necessarily eactly on one of them, but just write something good (it happened at least once!) For that note that you can freely use any of my ideas (and even complete stories) as inspiration or direct base for your stories (would be great if you credit me). That's one of the reason they are here for. thridly, I just enjoy discussing the story ideas, and I hope people who discuss them with me enjoy it too. Fourthly, I post the ideas, most of which will never turn into actual stories, for the sake of them not being in vain. At least people can read and enjoy them as ideas, which I hope is better then never seeing them at all.

Now, a little insight in my Russian works. In case you can read Russian, you can just read them here: ficbook.net/authors/969568
I just want to say that in addition to what I post here, there's also that profile of mine on ficbook (a Russian fanfiction site). There are Russian versions of some of the guro stories I post here (as of now there is nothing guro-related that is posted on ficbook, but not on gurochan) and some original Russian non-guro hentai stories in various states of completion (as of nowPost too long. Click here to view the full text.
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 No.19789

Glory Hole
(Cardcaptor Sakura, Kinomoto Sakura, casual)

Back at the long break Tomoyo couldn’t help but notice that both Sakura and Syaoran joined the rest of their group of friends at their usual lunch spot in the school’s yard surprisingly late. Everyone was already half through their meals, and that’s given they didn’t start before waiting for Sakura and Syaoran several minutes and even then there was more talking than actually eating. And when the two have finally arrived, not only they did so within a minute, which wouldn’t be so suspicious by itself, but they were also pretty badly acting with their ‘surprise’ at seeing each other being late too, and also their excuses. Namely, Syaoran hurried to speak first to say he was in the toilet, which made Sakura frantically try to come up with something different, and she ended up saying Terada-sensei asked her to suck his dick during his own lunch instead of Rika, who used to do so before she went missing about a month ago.

Tomoyo decided not to voice that her information on what their teacher has been doing during the long break differed. Sakura must have missed it because while she did have a vibrator back at home, in school she preferred to wear a simple wooden dildo she made in the crafts class, so that she didn’t have to take it out once in a while to charge. Tomoyo, on the other hand, could afford having spare toys, after all it was her mother’s company that produced them, and so she always kept half a dozen of egg vibrators working in her pussy and another full dozen charging at the wireless charging station plugged into a power socket at the back of the classroom. This is why at the start of this very break when she went to exchange the dead vibrators in her pussy for a set of freshly charged ones, Tomoyo happened to notice Terada-sensei picking up another toy that was charging alongside hers, which looked like an automatic masturbator. So unless he had two dicks, which is hardly a surgery an elementary school teacher can afford, he didn’t require Sakura to take care of his erection.

Something has definitely happened between Sakura and Syaoran. Tomoyo was dying to know the details, but seeing how the two weren’t willing to share yet, kept her usual polite demeanor, pretending she didn’t suspect anything. Although her suspicions only grew during the subsequent lessons, as Sakura and to a lesser extent Syaoran conPost too long. Click here to view the full text.

 No.21248

A New Year song. Just on time! Almost.
(There's an English translation below… the translation is not singable, but at least you can have an idea what it's about… I guess…)
I was imagining this sung by the Kagamine twins, thus plural first person perspective, but they're not really mentioned by name, so take it however you like.

Верёвка впивается в шею
(песня)

Original: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HvdX8jF4ick

The guro lyrics:

Верёвка впивается в шею
Всё туже, всё туже…
Петля зажимает трахею
Всё уже, всё уже…
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 No.21255

>>19789
Wow, i like this story, I love Card Captor Sakura, and this story is a strange mix between extreme pervertedness and innocent crush between Sakura and Shaloan,
But…. it does look like the date will be cancelled, as they both might end in the meat grinder….

 No.21390

> it does look like the date will be cancelled, as they both might end in the meat grinder…
Oh, they definitely will! In a couple of weeks when they get too weak to properly perform blowjobs.
Of course, as illustrated by Sakura returning the vibrators, the doors aren't locked or anything and they could technically always leave.
But they won't, because leaving the cabin would be ill manners.
There's no reason to worry about the date though. Obviously the date is planned for the case if they are alive. So they don't feel bad for the date being cancelled if the reason is that they would be dead. Or serving in the cabins, which is basically the same, because they'll stay there until they're dead.

 No.21419

> I love Card Captor Sakura
Oh, and speaking of Sakura, I've just uploaded a bunch of new alterations in the alteration thread on /g/, so you might want to check those out too.


 No.21369[Reply]

True Carnage
(Extreme genital mutilation, rape, extreme vore, extreme snuff)

The red substance was on every surface in Mary Jane's room, sticky yet also dripping with a silken glimmer. It extended from the surfaces, stretching towards the middle of the room from every corner and cranny making a red web. In the middle of it was a beautiful young woman named Mary Jane Watson-Parker; the wife of Peter Parker – the Spider Man. Her beautiful long red hair curtaining her beautiful heart shaped face, large blue eyes, gorgeously red lipsticked lips, and a terrified expression. Her smooth white skin, was perfect across her curvy build that was exposed fully – her clothes had been torn completely off, her nudity only covered by the red substance holding her to the dark web.

“Its Cletus, isn't it?” Mary Jane said, struggling against the tight dark cords.

In front of her, with the build of an Olympic wrestler, was a huge dark figure rippling with muscles that moved across his skin with each alien twitch of his body. Completely red, the man looked like it was made of the same material as the webbing, almost like he was wearing a suit – but the way it moved was inhuman and looked almost alive. The face looked like a full head mask with two overly large white comet shaped images where real eyes should have been, and a large fanged mouth that was much too large for the head, and a long lizard like tongue.

“Yes. This body used to that of Cletus Kasady but we have come to an… symbiotic understanding.” the low growl of an inhuman voice said as it approached her.

“You won't be able to get me to tell you anything, so just let me go or kill me.” Mary Jane spat out at the monster who only laughed in her face at the indignant display.

“Neither of those options will do, and I want no information on your husband… Spider Man.” it said grinning hungrily on her. Her face paled as she realized her trump card for negotiations had just vanished. If he already knew Spider Man's true identity, what did she want from her? She swallowed hard, her breath slightly increasing to a rapid flutter.

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