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 No.9471[Reply]


She was cute. But scarred. So am I. I'm not a slayer though, I've just been... through a lot. Not as much as a Top Class Assassin, though. She was, and hunted many of my fellows. Just my luck, here I was, with a beautiful big-breasted blue-eyed bitch that was tied to a chair, securely thanks to my former ship-mates. She had an hourglass figure, but I knew she wasn't a mere model. She was deadly, and the reason my crew was now dead, aside from the 2 who helped me stop her, but they had enough. They wanted no part of what I was going to do.

"Have you ever known love?" I ran my fingers over her sharp sweaty hair. It was soft and dry. My question was met with tired contempt.

"I'm saving myself for marriage." Typical of her sort. She was disciplined. I knew her training involved staying in frigid, fetid swamp water, getting frostbite and bug bites for hours. And everything she fought, that they fought for... was to fight against my personal freedom.

"And you think I should too? That I'm evil for being with the girl you murdered? You sick bitch." I saw her eyes go wide.

"Please, I thought she was someone else..." Oh, don't they always.

"You knew she probably wasn't. Just saw a fine girl, dark hair, rebel outfit, wore a symbol you disagreed with. You think 'eh, fuck it. Should kill her.'"

"I'm sorry. Just kill me and be done with it, please. If you let me go, I'll make it worth your while. I'll retire, and you can have anything." Killing her was her first suggestion. This meant that she knew where she was and who she was dealing with. At least the likelihood was enough to scare her into preferring death.


"Why should I just kill you? You did worse to me, you killed someone I love." I saw her eyes slowly drop as I spoke. "You killed her without a 2nd thought. I have to live without her now. And you think she's the sinner."

"No! We're all sinners! She's in a better- OOOOWWWW!!"

How dare she? I punched her face in... with a hammer.

"Yeah, a better place than you, that's for damn sure."

She only looked at me, wide eyed in fear, and clearly hoped it would be over soon. Her hopes were to be dashed.

I grabbed a rope of strong intertwined wires and noosed it around her, then threw the other end over a steel bar overhead and anchored it. I pulled, slowly, again and again, until she was hanging from the floor, still tied to a chair. The legs of it dangled just milimeters in the air, Post too long. Click here to view the full text.

 No.11546

Someone critique please.

 No.11547

Hello friend.

Now here's a story that's packed with the kind action that makes this site so exciting. It's easy to follow, too, and there's no urge to skip around. I read it cover to cover, so to speak.

I gather that you like to use something vaguely political as the source of conflict in your writing. I appreciate that there's a justification for what transpires.

"I ... fuck her asshole a lot." There are six words' worth of vanilla sex there is in this story, which is just the right amount. Maybe a little much, even.

Does the narrator burn down his ship?

 No.11549

Thank you! The narrator does not burn his ship down. I'm thinking I might've intended it all to be in a bunker on land and not out at sea. If I've left it ambiguous, perhaps that would be best, and I might even have a sequel (but I'm a very slow writer).



 No.11514[Reply]

The Fool's Baron



Alight with sound and music and gaiety, the festival rang with laughter and cheer as the King's new harlequin set herself to work, juggling and dancing and cracking wise with equal dexterity in every act as her audience heckled and cheered playfully. With some luck she had happened on the work, having been discovered by one of the king's servants when about town on an errand, and with much gusto she performed and acted and pranced, deriving a certain joy from entertaining her captive audience ... and deriving a certain joy and excitement as she felt ogling eyes on her body.

Wrapped in taut leathers and a colorful bodice of scarlet, with a tightly-drawn black corset and tall heels clicking on the floor as she moved, she knew that her dress would be sure to draw attention, and her admirers--man and woman alike--made little effort to hide their lust as they took in the show, and the fetching young lady performing it. Each high step, each demonstrative gesture caused her full breasts to jiggle, and she delighted in noticing each of their leering gazes; until she spun about in a dance and stopped before a tall and broad man, and paused. He was a mountain, a wide and strong man in sharp dress and wearing a long and pointed beard of the finest grooming. She could see quite immediately he was an important figure, and so stopped to wave a hand in bowing low, crossing one foot over another politely and bowing so low as to nearly touch the ends of her jester's hat on the floor; and when she rose again, the painted-white surface of her face creased just a bit as she winked but briefly at him. Quickly she turned and went back to her work with a neat cartwheel, and at the center of the floor she paused to again bow to the audience ... keeping her back to her admirer, and bowing low again; low enough to pinch her vulva between her thighs and present herself to him for a longer moment than was necessary to salute the crowd.

The night dragged long after that, and thoughts of before pushed away from her mind as she focused on the excited prospect of a midnight rendezvous; thoughts and questions, too, of what had happened to the previous harlequin, and those before her. As the hour grew late the party finally dispersed, dismissed by the King who had sated his palette on beer and wine and fine cuts of meats until he had lost his appetite for entertainment for the evening; and with a light and airy bounce in her step tPost too long. Click here to view the full text.

 No.11522

Ok, that was hot, but more dubish than con

 No.11531

I had trouble figuring out which tag to put so I just defaulted it there since she's not being technically raped, per se.

 No.11534

He tore the outfit! :(

BTW, whatever your proofreading workflow is, it's amazing.



 No.11022[Reply]

The Cull



Naked and trembling, little Lola mouse stepped forth from the dressing area, with only a thin black choker bearing a name tag and registry number. Large, round ears drooped submissively as she passed through the entrance, taking note of the many cameras with their shining red lights--indicating live filming--and timid, shaky footfalls led her slowly towards her fate ... but she shook not from fright, but restrained excitement.

This was the moment she had anticipated for months; the moment she had carefully dieted for, planned for, and prepared herself for: it was her time for the Cull, her time to become a star, to be admired and lusted for and, ultimately, cum for. Once a month, it had been ordained, the population of the Lesser species must be culled, to be reduced and slashed until it could again become manageable. Rampant overpopulation had demanded it, and modern depravity had twisted it into a game of lust, of sex, and of gory delight. In short, she would be sacrificed on the totem pole of a bull's member, impaled and stretched until she burst and, quite simply, died from the fucking.

Maybe it should have been normal for a girl to have a sense of self-preservation, to want to survive and thrive and grow into old age ... but this was a great event, a festival of sex and degenerate lust, and a celebrated ending to a short life; she would be a trophy, a prize, and a star in every right, with the event televised across the world to an audience millions strong, man and woman alike waiting and edging and watching as one of the arena's stars ripped her apart upon his powerful member. Indeed, it was a volunteer's event: prey were groomed and trained and even bred for this, and often the line to apply grew longer than the list of available positions; victims could even choose from their death options, and the options soon had to be expanded to include the creative, and for mass executions--firing squad, hanging, beheading, spitting. It had become an honor, a violent and sexy ending to a life that would otherwise have no meaning. Lola had chosen the personal option, the one hardest to earn, to whom only the most "gifted" of girls could be chosen: public arena copulation.

As trembling legs brought her forward, she did her best to hide a blush, appearing to be demure and shy under the bright lights of the arena in playing to her audience--doubtless an adoring one, or so she hoped--and she had tPost too long. Click here to view the full text.
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 No.11079

Thank you, all. I don't have any other tales--yet--but I plan on writing more stories in the future. Inspiration is the hard part ... I might take suggestions if only to jog my muse. (-:

 No.11103

Really sexy story.

 No.11218

I'm not into furry, so I tried my best to imagine the girl being human where possible. The story was super hot though and I've surely enjoyed it.

 No.11516

<3 That was so great :) thankyou!

 No.11517

>>11516

You're very welcome. C:



 No.10875[Reply]

So, some years ago, I wrote a "little" serial called Puppy Mill. It was about a woman, Merrie, who was kidnapped off the streets, raped, and amputated into a sex slave. Later, after a lot of drama, she ended fucked a lot and gained an incredible amount of powers. It ended when she killed a goddess... at the same time she died.

This isn't done, but there are going to be a huge number of tags, not limited to fucking in every hole, amputation, size, magic, rape, messy, demon, bondage, D/s, and a probably a tentacle or two.
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 No.11332

Chapter 20: Countless Bites (?/F tort)

As soon as Merrie hit the ground, the impact and the light broke her concentration on her transformation spell. She let out a strangled gasp as the fur melted off her body and her canine form reformed back into a cropped, naked woman.

She didn't have time to scramble to her knees or regain her dazed senses when the spiders swarmed over her. Their weight pressed down on her as their tiny, needle-like legs scraped along her skin. Even though each one was no heavier than a handful of rice, more of them kept crawling on top of her until the pressure squeezed her ribs and ground her body into the ground.

Merrie tried to pull herself up to her wrists and knees but the carpet of spiders held her in place. She knew she could move them individually but somehow the creatures linked together and she couldn't find the leverage to get more than a few centimeters of leeway underneath the blanket of spiders pinning her to the ground.

They wasted no time attacking. Tiny pricks from their legs became sparks of pain as teeth dug into her skin. Those increased rapidly as more of them began to feast on her helpless body. It wasn't just one bite, though. They all attacked at once, turning her world into a sparkling cloud of agony as they bit at her nipples, breasts, and inner thighs. With every bite, their poison seeped into her body and set her nerves on fire.

Merrie cried out and tried to wipe them away. The smooth end of her wrist smashed against them but the spiders bowed underneath the weight and dug their feet deeper into her burning flesh. She needed fingers to pry the small bodies away but she hadn't had them for years. Instead, she flailed uselessly against them as they crawled up her arm and began to feast on her wrist, elbow, and even shoulder.

It was too much for her. She screamed out in agony as she thrashed back and forth, trying to crush them with her body. The only thing she did was grind them into her breasts where they tore into her nipples, sides, and thighs.

Her helplessness set off a flame between her legs. Despite the agony and pain, being pinned to the ground caused her pussy to grow slicker and desire to the curl in the back of her thoughts. The urge to surrender to the attacking spiders fought with her senses. It would be a painful ending to her life but she would come harder than ever while it happened.

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 No.11333

Chapter 21: Blessed Darkness (MM/F oral anal tort inc cons nc asphyx)

The spiders came with her in a choking, biting blanket of agony. They gnawed on her body while the ones crawling inside attacked her insides. Flashes of heat and pain exploded along her senses.

The sensation of a hundred spiders crawling and biting inside her cunt and bowels was maddening. She tried to force them out with her muscles, but the spiders only slid around the slickness of her pussy and bit down on new places.

Merrie wasn't sure if she successfully shifted into the Shadows but she thought she felt the comforting icy seeping through the carpet of agony that surrounded her.

The spiders in her mouth forced their way deeper, prying open the tight confines of her throat as they squirmed deeper. They reached the point where her breath and stomach split. Some of them started to crawl into her lungs while others forced their way deeper toward her stomach.

She jerked violently and pawed at her throat. She couldn't breathe. It was agony as black spots form across her vision. Despite being blind in the carpet, the darkness of her suffocation was surrounded by a haze that was invisible but somehow visible at the same time.

The weight and pressure of the spiders attacking her lessened slightly. A small bit of hope rose inside her but she continued to paw at her throat, trying to clear her throat.

The spiders in her pussy were maddening. The thousand legs pricking and poking her from the inside were almost as distracting as the slid of thick, heated bodies as they rolled and twisted inside her. It was a hundred fingers stroking her inner walls that forced more juices to pour out of her cunt.

The spiders in her intestines were just as painful. They were forcing their way deeper into her body, swelling her stomach as the spiders pried their way into her sphincter and pulling themselves deep. Waves of pain rolled across her nerves. She tried to clamp down, to stop them for violating her further, but they continued their march through her lower organs.

A wave of icy wind slammed against her body. She shuddered at the pleasure of it, it sparkled along her pussy and along her agonized limbs. Not willing to give up, she pawed at her throat with one hand and at the spiders with her others.

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 No.11421

Chapter 22: Second Wave (MM nc anal oral, MMF nc anal oral)

As much as she wanted to remain in the Shadow realm and enjoy her afterglow, Merrie couldn't. She crawled over on her knees and wrists and stretched out. Her abused skin, burnt and bitten, sparked with pain. She could see where Sable's holy magic had peeled back her thin flesh and revealed the smoking darkness inside.

She gathered the darkness around her, forming it into ribbons, and wrapped it around her injuries. If she had time, she would have poured it into her body to let it fill her but she didn't think she'd have the time to let it set and replace her insides. She only hoped that Sable's holy energy wouldn't strip away the darkness before she could recover.

With another surge of power, she reformed her cloak. The familiar construct rippled out of the darkness and fluttered to envelope her. It tickled her skin as it wrapped right around her body, sealing up against her leaking pussy, ass, and skin. The pressure felt good and a startling contrast between the blanket of spiders that had recently attacked her. It would also give her a second layer of protection against the light.

Glancing around, she saw the massed creatures and had an idea. The smaller shadow beasts were capable of pulling off the spiders. The corpses on the dark ground were proof of that.

Hope in her thoughts, she reached out with her mind and asked the creatures if they would help her.

They weren't intelligent like other bitches or humans, but they responded with a cloud of love and trust. They were hers, her children and her army. They would die for her.

Nodding, she took a deep breath and steeled herself for battle. Her spectral bandages tightened around her body as she summoned the energy to transform herself back into hound form. Surrounded by the darkness of the Shadow realm, it only took a flicker of movement before she was once again covered in fur with her massive paws grinding into the ground.

Bolstered, she casted her familiar combat spells: speed, strength, and protection. Using her connection with the shadow horde, she let the spells envelop the gathered creatures. The energies of the Shadows helped her and she layered them quickly on the beasts. Each would wouldn't be able to fight against a well-trained individual but she hoped it would be enough to allow them to eradicate the spiders that infested her home.

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 No.11422

Purifying Flames

Heat beat against Merrie's body. The waves of burning ripped at her raw nerves, reminding her of the tiny cuts and scratches that peppered her body. She could feel the heat against the rents in her thin skin and the contrast of the icy darkness inside her with the smoldering air.

She whimpered and tried to roll away from the heat and back into the cold embrace of the shadow creatures that protected her. The movement caused agony to spark along her senses. She managed to roll up on her side and then down on her front, crushing her breasts against the hot ground.

Her rolling also brought her into contact with the sharp edge of something wood or metal. It cut into her skin, peeling it open and allowing more heat to pour into her fragile body.

Merrie gasped as she woke up fully. Inhaling, she choking on ashes and embers. With a cry, she doubled over and slammed her head into a heavy barrel before slumping to the ground. Still choking, she covered her mouth and winced as her raw skin scraped against the wood.

Blinking, she peered underneath the barrel. Light flickered across the room, yellows and oranges painted on the ground. Wood smoke and sharp smells swirled around her. It dragged streamers of embers and sparks around Borias' prized possessions.

Merrie pulled back and peeked up from her vantage point. The entire ceiling was on fire, the flames already blackening the timbers and ashes poured down. She pulled back from the flickering light and crawled further underneath the barrel.

Fear sparked in her mind. She reached out for the shadow creatures, to make sure they were okay. Instead of brushing against a cloud of thoughts, there was nothing.

Her heart beat faster in her chest. She tried again, extending her senses beyond the burning basement and up into the area above her. She felt where the portal to the Shadow realm had been, the fading magic felt like a healing scar along smooth flesh. But there were no shadow kin or even the smaller creatures around her. They had all disappeared, no doubt killed by Sable's holy magic.

Tears burned in her eyes and she let out a choking sob. They had sacrificed themselves for her again. It wasn't the first time but that didn't diminish the ache she felt in her heart. She could still feel the places where their minds connected with her own. The thin leads that lead to each one had been burned away and Post too long. Click here to view the full text.

 No.11515

Chapter 24: Exhaustion

The world roared around her, muted only by aged wood. The barrel rocked back and forth from the winds that buffeted it, shaking it loose as the rest of the mill house burned down around her. The heat seeped in but she managed to hold it back with a shield of shadows that frosted the inside of the wood.

The cold from the shadows didn't last long against the heat. It only had time to ice the wood for a few minutes before the fire melted it. Waves of heat seeped through the barrel and swirled around her as she struggled to keep her attention moving from one warm patch to the other. She laid down a thin layer of ice and shadows against each one before moving to the next and then the next. By the the time she had painted the entire insides of the barrel with her spell, the first parts were hot again.

It was exhausting but mindless. Her mind drifted slightly as she swirled her attention around. There was nothing to focus on, she didn't have someone to dominate her or even time to masturbate. Instead, she ended up going over the battle over and over. Each time, she thought about the things she missed or mistakes she made: she could have used her collar more, she could have dodged in a different direction, what if she opened a portal first, could she have saved Sable without making her think Bass was dead? She doubted every choice and decision.

The heat continued to seep through the wood. As it melted the frost, the steam swirled around her and tickled her reforming lungs and skin.

She couldn't sleep or let her mind doze. Her need to sleep and heal throbbed in the back of her head, plucking at her attention. She had to fight it, knowing that if she missed too many sections, it would be harder to recover. If she stopped, then she would be boiled alive.

Merrie groaned and twisted slightly. The beer at the bottom of the barrel sloshed around her. Some of it leaked into her wounds and she felt the sting of it burn across her skin before it faded in the boiling darkness of her core. More of it lapped at her ass and pussy, teasing the sensitive flesh. She wanted to finger herself, to build up pleasure to give herself more energy but couldn't afford the distraction.

Groaning, she twisted around again and redoubled her attempts to focus on the spell keeping her cold. Sooner or later, the fire would finally die down and then she could save her friends.



 No.11480[Reply]

Claire walked to the car with the sergeant who was her recruiter. At just thirteen years old she wouldn't have been able to join until congress, in another social expirement with the military lowered the recruiting age to anyone who had started high school. They reasoned, this would be just like military school, only with the actual military. It was a highly controversial move, but to Claire it was a chance to escape her home. She was constantly fighting with her mom, and her stepdad didn't seem to give two shits about her, except to check out her blossoming tits. She was a bit of a late bloomer, but had just graduated to a 28 B bra. at 5 feet even these still seemed a bit small on her and she was hoping they would grow still. She had olive skin, courtesey of her father, who was second generation Assyrian. Her mother was white, and she could definately pass for a white girl, just with a good tan. She was overall pleased with her appearance, several years of running cross country in junior high had toned her whole body, and she hoped, prepared her for the physical challanges of Parris Island.
At the MEPS, she went through the usual tests and paperwork, somewhat confused by it, but signed her name were the Gunny told her to. She noticed there were several other girls who looked about her age, and when she got a free moment went to talk to them. Most were joining the Army, a couple were Air Force and Navy, and one was joining the Marines, like her. Beverly 'Bev' was 14, with red hair and light skin. Also starting her freshmen year that fall, she wasn't trying to escape home, but had joined for adventure. They chatted nervously until it was time to go. As they had enlisted out of RS Atlanta, they did not get on a plane, but took a bus with 8 other kids, all boys to Parris Island.
After the initial shock, "GET OFF MY BUS! ON THE YELLOW FOOTPRINTS! RUN HERE! RUN THERE!" they found themselves inside a classroom, segregated from the boys they were in a room with about 45 other girls. Then a female drill instructor came into the room an informed them that the were 4th Battalion Oscar Company Platoon 4092 and that from then on, she was the mother.
The culture shock was complete. They were stripped of their clothes, issued standard camouflage utilities or cammies, and hearded to a squad bay full of metal bunk bed style racks.
Most of the girls in the platoon were seventeen or eighteen years old. But there were eleven of them tPost too long. Click here to view the full text.

 No.11486

The author sure did their research on the USMC, but when's the guro gonna show up? Will the girls die in combat after finishing bootcamp?

 No.11487

A cann scene would have been epic. Oh well.

 No.11497

Woah there! Dude, read the stickied post, then edit and repost this story. Walls of text are nearly unreadable.

And trust me, most people are not going to struggle through a story posted like this to see if it's any good.



 No.11485[Reply]

"No! Wait! Ple" the small girl, over 18 but looking hardly 15, pleaded and gasped, "whaah. Please pleassse no don't..." she was sobbing.

There was nothing left to lose. No food or water. It was all filled with disease, iron, and lead. So be it.

We cut her clothes away. My cohorts took great pleasure, except the ones already dead inside.

Piece by piece, cloth fell and skin was bared.
The goosebumps that rose on her skin were more than obvious.

"Have you ever been in a fight? Did you your parents ever hit you?" I asked her, as I was always an inquisitive one.

She shvered and sobbed "wahuhhh noooo. Please I don't l... I can't pl pl pleaaase waah."

"Hmmm. Well, after some belly smacking, face smacking, and ass spanking, perhaps you can prove your worth."

I grabbed her shoulders and span her around, then pushed her neck down while holding her hip, then pressed her asscheeks apart.

"Mmm." I groaned in my horny contentment, "such a nice puckered asshole."


 No.11479[Reply]

Dana watched, transfixed as her sister Holly was snuffed by her brother. She wasn't sure, but she thought she saw her sister cumming as she died. She definately came watching it, climaxing when Virgil slit Holly's throat. Dana was definately aroused by the thought of being snuffed, but she knew she had to have children first. She had been doing her best, fucking whenever she got the chance. She had not gotten pregnant yet. She had just had her most recent period a week ago. It had started to come regularly, so she was hopeful she could have her first baby soon.
That night Dana crept into Virgil's room, sliently the naked elevin year old slipped under the covers with him and began to stroke his cock. Virgil woke up from a half sleep to find his young sister playing with his cock. He smiled and pulled her up on top of him. Leaning her head down she began to kiss her brother, an act which he wholeheartedly reciprocated. As the two siblings kissed his cock rose to full hardness. He reached down and moved it to the entrance to his sister's pussy, and she began to push back on it. They kept on kissing as she slid completely back on Virgils hard shaft, and he rolled her over.
As he began to slowly thrust in and out she looked up at him and said, "I love you Virgil."
He smiled back, "I love you too, sis."
She felt a shiver run down her back at the mention of them being related. She began to think how sexy it would be to have her brothers baby, and how sexy it was to have his bare penis inside her.
The girl was young, her hips had only just begun to widen, and her titties were tiny. But that was ok with Virgil, he loved to fuck young girls, their pussies were so tight that he couldn't help but cum in them.
"You're so sexy Dana."
All of a sudden Virgil started to really force his cock deep with sharp strokes, she felt her brothers cock twitch and giggled a little as she knew that he was cumming inside her.
Her sated brother rolled off of her and onto his back, and she curled up next to him, throwing one leg over his and pressing her pussy against his thigh. As the two lovers drifted off to sleep she thought about how much she loved her brother.
The next morning at breakfast she came down in one of his tank tops and boxers. Her father noticed and smiled approvingly. He was glad she was taking care of her brother.
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 No.11435[Reply]

Superhero Rivalry


"Now that you're officially a member of the team, it's time for me to show you our secret weapon," said Novahawk with a little smirk, her glowing green eyes wandering up and down Hyperbunny's athletic body.

"Huh? We've got a secret weapon?"

Hyperbunny hopped up from the couch with a big grin. She was 18 years old, bouncy and perky, always smiling, with long blond hair and perfect skin, and her costume included long ears that would often flop down in front of her face. Her costume was both backless and strapless, the fuzzy white bullet-proof fabric held to her large breasts and flat belly by specially designed adhesive. The suit stretched to give her total freedom of movement and make her breasts very bouncy. It wrapped around to cover her firm butt with a fuzzy ball to represent a bunny tail. Bare legs showed off her powerfully muscular thighs, and a low cut revealed the tops of her breasts and most of her cleavage.

"That's right. Let's go down to the vault and I'll show you."

Novahawk was the leader of the team, 35 years old with sharply defined features and short brown hair. She wore a slim jetpack on her back with mechanical wings that folded neatly away when not in use. Her costume was twin strips of tough red fabric that looped over her shoulders and under her crotch, connecting to her jetpack in the back and tied together by a zigzag of lacing down her front. The lacing was loose enough to give a wide window into her cleavage. Her breasts were by far the largest on the team before Hyperbunny arrived. Novahawk's flawless orbs were firm and athletic, held tightly in place by her costume without a trace of bounce.

"Say, Novahawk, you're not jealous because I'm stronger and faster than you, right?" Hyperbunny frowned and fidgetted with one of her fuzzy rabbit ears.

Novahawk forced a laugh and rolled her eyes. "What? No, of course not. What a foolish thing to say. Why would you ask that?"

"It's just that everyone here is super friendly, but you seem to glare at me an awful lot."

"Ridiculous. I do not."

"Okay!" Hyperbunny suddenly grinned and started bouncing along as she walked beside Novahawk.

Novahawk scowled and glanced sideways at Hyperbunny's huge bouncing breasts.

"Must you walk that way?"

"Sorry."

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 No.11458

>>11457
> Attacking teammate in so horrible way was too dumb because how she will explain that to her team?

I seriously considered having Bunny ask about that and thereby giving Novahawk a chance to explain her evil scheme, but when writing the story there never seemed to be a good moment for it. Novahawk was going to lie to the team about what happened, and she expected to be believed. She'd intimidate Bunny into confirming the story under threat of losing her powers.

> I had no time but I had some interesting ideas how bunny was going to lose her breasts in the hard way.

I look forward to it.

> Your ending is somewhat disappointing because it ruins all expectations.

What expectations do you mean?

>I had an idea that they later try to use some experimental technology to grow back breasts but start competing for whose is going to be bigger.

That is hilarious. Maybe I'll give that a try.

 No.11459

Let's continue with the surgery to remove Hyperbunny's breasts.


A small curtain blocked Hyperbunny's view of her own breasts during the procedure. She might have lost her mind if she had to watch the knife slicing through her flesh, but she had an excellent view of the tray where her flesh was being discarded. An especially large chunk of white fat plopped onto the tray to jiggle in front of Hyperbunny's eyes. It had a square of her flawless smooth skin still attached.

"Doctor, I... I think you're taking too much," she stammered weakly, "If... If it goes on like this, I won't have any breasts left!"

"I'm sorry, but I have to do what is necessary to keep you from exploding."

"But... But you promised I'd get to keep some breasts!" Bunny sniffled and trembled, breathing faster, her heart racing.

"I don't control what needs to be removed. Please don't move. If we don't remove all the toxin, it will just spread again. You're lucky your breasts were so large, or else the toxin would have filled your breasts completely the way it did for Novahawk."

Hyperbunny bit her lip as she watched another huge chunk of fat plop onto the tray.

"Please, Doctor, please tell me that I've still got some breasts left."

"I haven't finished removing the contaminated tissue yet, but yes, right now your breasts are about the size of Sentry Girl's breasts. So they're smaller than Novahawk used to have, but still well above average."

"Okay, okay," stammered Hyperbunny, blinking back tears, "I can live with that. I'm going to be okay."

She swallowed heavily as more chunks of pale white breast tissue piled onto the tray. Her blue eyes grew huge as a perfect pink nipple with round areola landed on the tray, followed by another.

"My nipples!" she shrieked, jerking up on the table, "No! What have you done?"

"Hold still!" snapped Dr. Electrode, pushing hard against Hyperbunny's shoulder, "If you keep moving I might accidentally cut something healthy!"

"Oh no, please! Put my nipples back!"

"I'm sorry, but they're contaminated. Even if you could keep them, I'm afraid there is no way that your breasts would ever be able to produce milk after this procedure."

"I... I understand." Hyperbunny breathed heavily through her nose, trying to control her trembling. "Please, how much breast do I have left now?"

"More than SpacewPost too long. Click here to view the full text.

 No.11460

>>11458
She'd intimidate Bunny into confirming the story under threat of losing her powers.

This would not work because Hawk cant use the gun in front of all team
also how they are supposed to work together from that time?

>>What expectations do you mean?
I already explained that. We all may have some ideas what will happen next but you limit those options without any need.

>>I look forward to it.

Not sure when I will be able to do that since writing stories take lots of time.

>>11459
So it seems that Novahawks plan worked ta some extent, Bynny's boobs got smaller after all LOL

 No.11463

>>11460
> This would not work because Hawk cant use the gun in front of all team.

One does not need to be holding a gun to use a gun to intimidate someone. Just threatening to get the gun later can be enough. In Novahawk's mind, Bunny was going to be cowardly and stupid and do everything she was told just to avoid any risk of being shot. This is how organized crime stops people from talking to the police without having to continuously hold a gun against everyone's back.

> How they are supposed to work together from that time?

Novahawk wanted Bunny to leave the team, so Novahawk was planning to make their working relationship as terrible as possible. She never expected Bunny to stay after being threatened and losing her breasts.

We never got to see how Novahawk imagined the whole encounter going because it all went terribly wrong for her. It might be a fun story to write, but unfortunately I will be too busy to write for a few days. Perhaps later.

 No.11464

>>11463
In this situation threats to do it later will not work, because if the team believed Bunny's words, that's game over for Nowahawk she will not be able to use that gun anymore ever.
And unless Bunny is totally brainless she will know that.
If Nowahawk wanted to kick her out it would make more sense just to tell her to leave while threatening to use that gun if she refuses.

there is no reasonable situation possible how that plan could work
Of course this does not matter in this kind of story since nothing what superheroes do makes any sense anyway LOL



 No.11369[Reply]

Long story short: I wrote this for another, Touhou focused site. While they may be able to speak of writing quality, the important thing is whether the story is hot if you're into girls stabbing other girls. I have no idea if it is. And so I cross-post here, where I can more likely garner such opinions. I'm not wholly sure it isn't a little tame for the site on average, but, it's the first place to come to mind for something bloody. So, enjoy, hopefully.

...


With a crack, the red-skinned oni's face snaps backwards as a massive, muscled arm smashes a fist into it; the rest of his body soon follows, hurtling through the air and tumbling along the ground several dozen yards to crash against the wall of a nearby building, leaving cracks upon it as he lays there unconscious. A girl of silver, braided hair, clad in maid uniform, stoops to observe the unconscious oni suddenly blocking her path. Yuugi, meanwhile, sighs and dusts off her knuckles as the ring of spectators cheer and an energetic male voice nearby calls out, “And that's twenty nine in a row! Even three on one, the Oni of Oni cannot be stopped! Will anyone even come forth to challenge her after that one?!”

Yuugi takes the large gourd of sake in her other hand and upends it, pouring copious amounts of alcohol straight down her throat. She mutters to herself, “Goddamn weaklings. Shit's fuckin' boring.” She hasn't had a good scrap in who knows how long, and this little fight club doesn't help. Looking around the crowd, it seemed the announcer was right; no one else wanted to step forward this evening, they'd gotten their fun. There was, however, the maid clinically examining the guy who'd been knocked unconscious upon her path. That silver, it was familiar... ah, yes, wasn't that the head maid of that vampire mansion? Actually, hold on. She was supposed to be lightning quick. Maybe if Yuugi actually had to work to punch someone... As Sakuya stands up, no longer enamored by the effects of Yuugi's blow upon the man, the large oni calls out, “Oi! Dog of the Scarlet Devil, was it?”

Sakuya hardly has the time to take a single stride before freezing once more, turning to regard Yuugi through the gap in the audience. “Do you require something from me?” she asks, rather coldly. “I'm on important business for the Mistress, so if it's nothing urgent-”

“Come into the ring,” Yuugi all but demands, polishing off her drink. “You're damn fast, right? I need sPost too long. Click here to view the full text.

 No.11430

>>11369
Please write more stories about hot girls stabbing other girls
10/10

 No.11434

got a bit too wordy at the end but that was a fucking hot story

 No.11443

>>11430
Unfortunately, I'll have to disappoint, as I've no such plans. I am trying to work on writing something else that will likely end up here, but it will not have a stabbing focus. I am also slow as fuck, so it's not gonna show up any time soon.

>>11434
Long paragraphs is a thing I've certainly heard, and I might try and work on that for anything else I do. Likely I'll not learn brevity in any short order, though.

 No.11447

>>11443
Oh I didn't mean it was too long, just unnecessarily convoluted sentences and unfitting word choice that seemed like thesaurus overuse.



 No.11268[Reply]

Long time lurker, first time storyteller. All stories here take place in what I'm tentatively calling the Frumpverse, as all stories here adhere to the same ruleset through wildy different universes and settings.
My Arrowverse stories are by far the most detailed and give the most info, si I'll start with them.

While I'm pretty sure I don't actually have to say this but I will anyways just in case. I think it'll become pretty clear where I stand on a certain politician, but don't care to discFuss it, so if you don't have anything to say about my stories, it would be best if you said nothing.

And without further adieu...
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 No.11273

That's a good start.

 No.11274

Getting tired of all this plot? Well luckily for you, there's actually some porn in this one!


Seeing Oliver on the tv and seeing him walk into CNRI was something else. She supposed there was no avoiding this but it was awkward all the same.

“Hi Laurel,” he said quietly when she got close enough.

“Oliver,” she replied in kind.

“Is there somewhere we could talk?”

Laurel nodded, leading him to the conference room. “How’ve you been?”

“Good, I guess. It’s definitely been an adjustment, what with the…” he trailed of, gesturing at the ring in her nose. “I gotta say, Thea has really embraced the whole FRA thing. She won’t put any clothes on.”

“I assume Walter transferred her title to you?”

“Ah, not yet.

“Well, she’s getting you adjusted. Has she explained to you what a PSN is?”

“Yeah, girls have numbers instead of last names.”

“Yes. I’m Laurel-0142, not Laurel Lance anymore. It doesn’t matter right now because it’s just us, but you should get used to using PSNs. It’s considered rude to address someone else’s property only by her personal designation. And Thea-0211 is only 17 so I’d be surprised if she was certified as anything other than a sextoy.”

“What do you mean certified?”

“Has nobody explained it?” He shook his head and she sighed. “One of the clauses in the FRA deals with how to value females and that’s done by certification. Once out of high school the DFA offers tests females can take in lieu of going to college. For example, I’m certified as a level 2 legal assistant.”

“I figured you would’ve been a lawyer by now.”

“It’s not that I don’t want to, it’s that I can’t. Females are restricted from just about any position with administrative, executive or supervisory responsibility. Basically anything that might put a female in a position of authority over a man.”

“That’s pretty… extreme.”

“It sounds worse than it is. Even though I can’t become a full lawyer my second level certification means I’m the next best thing. The only thing I can’t do is start my own law firm.”

“What about Thea? You said she was probably only certified as a sextoy? I know women are supposed to be considered… things but seriously, certified as a sextoy?”

“First of all, females aren’t ‘considered’ things, we are things. Second, yeah, a female’s primary biological functions aPost too long. Click here to view the full text.

 No.11284

Awsome! I love stories with legal female slavery

 No.11293

Seems promising so far, can't wait to see what you'll come up with.

 No.11437

Seems someone's stealing my name...

That's okay. This is pretty good so far.



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