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 No.16855[Reply]

The Tortured Tits




We’re finally here, I thought to myself as we pulled
into the parking lot of an adult bookstore a few miles
from our house. Samantha, my twenty-eight year old wife,
had been asking questions about it for some time now.
She wanted to know what was in there, who was in there,
what went on in there, what might happen if we went in
there.

She had heard about glory holes, especially as they
were used by the gay community for anonymous oral sex.
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 No.16784[Reply]

This is my first attempt at story writing, I have a lot of ideas but being italian i’m not so sure that everything will be grammatically correct, sorry for that. As you can see I have a strong belly button fetish and I like to give as much details as possible about the victim belly anatomy and navel shape and how that changes the approach to each victim. So here it is the first part of a story I’m writing with a member of another board. I would really appreciate any suggestion for future development, like characteristics of the next victims or killing methods. Thanks in advance.
Here we go
It was half past midnight when a received the call I was waiting for the past week. “Sir, your payment has been accepted, a black van will come to pick you up to take you to our club, everything has been prepared as per your indications.
It took me sometime to gather all the money to pay for this exclusive “Death Club” but finally I can let all my darkest fantasies come true.. not just one, but five young ladies where waiting for me and their bellies ready to transform from attractive to gory messy.
Finally the van stopped to its destination and I was escorted inside the club and to the private room I was designed to. Everything was perfectly organized, a big stone table resembling an altar is placed at the exact center of the room, on one corner there where all kind of tools attached to the wall. I took my time to examine the shiny knives of different dimensions, a power drill, scissors of all kind, scalpels… everything needed was there. On the opposite wall I could see a window to another room. Standing a the center of the other room are five of the most beautiful girls I’ve ever seen. “please sir which one you would like to start with?”
MARGHERITA
The choice was simple, my eyes were captured by a tall blonde girl, her skin pale white, her belly was long with a very small belly button at its center. Her navel was rendered almost invisible by the shiny belly ring she was wearing. She was escorted to my room, she entered wearing nothing but a bright red bikini. She looked scary and tears runned down her face as she was lied on the stone table, wrist and ankles secured to avoid excessive movements. “What’s your name honey?” “Margherita sir… please don’t hurt me too much” she says sobbing and crying
“My dear, we are going to have a lot of fun with this long belly of yours”, She looked down to see my finger pointing at her upper stomach and goPost too long. Click here to view the full text.

 No.16786

I really enjoyed it. The grammar wasn’t bad for a non native speaker. Check out some of my stories on here and let me know what you think.



 No.16626[Reply]

A gothic chick goes to an all female asian massage parlor, gets butchered and cooked at a conveniently adjacent asian restaurant. Narrated from the victim's POV. I think it was on the old site before the site was lost.

 No.16775

>>16626
Seconded. I have no such story, but this sounds interesting and vaguely familier.



 No.16763[Reply]

Tags: Preteens, m/f, sex, and murder Original characters.

A First time for Everything.

Ava was excited, she'd always been one of natures tomboys, even for an eleven year old the flat chested girl had barely registered that boys were looking at her differently now and she did her best to hide it in baggy clothing or a bit of rough and tumble play. It had been a few weeks since they'd nicked some adult magazines from the neighbor's trash. Rather graphic old spank rags with crisp pictures of much older girls in compromising positions with one or even two other men. The local gang of boys had accepted the girl as part of their group and the little filth rags were stashed in an old rickety shed deep in the woods behind the houses. It wasn't much but to the gang it was home, their own little club house filed with the detritus of youthful rebellion and the hub of their games. Ava had been talked into meeting one of the older boys out at the clubhouse alone they always teased about acting out what they saw in the magazines, and a little goading and accusations of being a chicken was all it took to get her alone to experiment.

Wilson always stared at Ava just a little too long. Although she was 'one of the boys' she was also very much not a boy. Wilson had been one of the ones that had stolen the old porn magazines and had brought them to the clubhouse for all of 'The Losers' (that's what they called themselves) to enjoy. The boys' dicks got long and hard and they didn't know why, but after seeing the porn magazines one of them figured it was to put in one of the dark, mysterious holes they had seen in the gashes between the older girls legs. Wilson had always had a thing for being curious about things. When he was younger, he wanted to know what it would be like to kill something, so he found some kittens and killed them, one by one in different ways, hanging them, drowning, cutting them open. He had done it in the woods and no one had known. He found a stray dog a year later and hung it. He then found another one and had cut its throat and it was thrilling. He had gotten hard over it and now with Ava there, he was wondering what it would be like to do a person.

The rest of the boys were on various summer vacations this week, so it was just Wilson and Ava around and they both ended up at the clubhouse. He found Ava, leaned over the table, staring at the photos, touching herself through her crotch when he walked up. He didn't sayPost too long. Click here to view the full text.


 No.16443[Reply]

=Chloé's Graduation Party=
Tags: Miraculous Lady Bug, Marinette Dupain-Cheng, Cannibalism, Snuff, Non-Consensual, Humiliation, Slavery, Bondage, Complete
All characters in this story are 18 years or older.

“Alright Marlena, we have a deal. Let me just get Marinette for you and- Oh! Marinette you have excellent timing! Come here for a second will you? Marlena and I have something to tell you.”

Marinette blinked. Her dad was smiling, though he still looked looked fairly serious, and Alya's mom looked almost ecstatic. She wondered what was happening, but given their expressions, it couldn't be bad news.

“Sure! What's going on, dad?” Marinette asked cheerfully.

“Well, honey? Marlena here just offered your mom and I enough money that we can move into a bigger house and expand the shop!” Tom Dupain announced cheerfully.

Marinette's eyes opened wide in shock, her jaw dropping at the news. “That's great dad!” she announced before she really thought over what her dad had declared. “Wait,” Marinette's brow furrowed thoughtfully, “Alya and her family aren't any better off than we are? How'd Alya's mom get the money and why is she giving it to us?”

“Well,” Marinette's dad started slowly, “Marlena's not giving it to us, she's using it to buy something from us. And it's not her money, it's the money her boss gave her to buy what she needed.”
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 No.16522

>>16520
I haven't been posting much here because it's really annoying to write for hours working on something and then get no responses at all. Gurochan doesn't even give me a counter to see how many times the thread has been read so it kind of feels like shouting into the void. It's not a fun feeling.

Sorry this wasn't your cup of tea. If you want stories with more meat to them I've been posting them on Hentai-Foundry and other sites where I avctually get feedback. hxxp://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/thevisitorblack/35851/Priyanka-Caught-Spying That one includes tentacle rape with boiling water tentacles. There's some others up there too that might be more your scene as well.


>>16504
There's plenty of description. I mention Marinette's blue hair, her petite frame, her small breasts, her clothes, her personality, her race, how her skin is smooth and soft. You don't need a mechanical descripts that she's 5 foot 4 or what have you. This is meant to be a short story focusing on physchological and not physical aspects of the fetish. Cutting down on purple prose is in aid of that. The fact that you didn't recognize the names isn't because the show is obscure (it's actually pretty popular and airs on major networks in the US and multiple streaming services) it's because you personally don't watch it. I tagged the show in the title for a reason. This was a story about characters from that show. If you chose not to look them up that's on you, not on me.

Now certainly there was no prep or actual snuff shown on screen. There was torture, but it was psychological and clearly that doesn't count for you. But I didn't say that there would be any torture. I tagged noncon, not torture. So that's not my fault either.

The fact that the most "action" in the story is a sex scene and then a scene of the aftermath is in fact on me. It's intentional. This story (and the other stories of the series that I haven't been posting to gurochan because I'm pretty sure no one's reading any of my work since they're definitely not commenting) are exercises in seeing how little I can write of that sort of thing and still have it recognizably work as a guro story. Clearly it didn't work for you, but again, that's your preferences, not because the story itself is bPost too long. Click here to view the full text.

 No.16715

>>16522

Who says you'll alter the way you write? The fact that you wasted writing this and reading my comment made me happy.

Nobody cares about your writing anyway lol

 No.16717

>>16715
Hey buddy? Wanna stop being an asshole?

>>16443

Always a fan of your work, man.

 No.16741

VisitorBlack is in my top list among thousands of authors!

 No.16745

>>16741
>>16717

Poor widdle piggie started thesockpuppets! Bwahahahaahahah



 No.16711[Reply]

Hello folks, I've got some spots open as far as erotic commissions are concerned and I wanted to make my talents available here, since I often cater to those with more niche fetishes and kinks.

I write for a living, so you can expect a judgement free experience as well as a level of professionalism that you do not usually find when commissioning stories.

I have handled a great many kinks and fetishes and will consider all requests. My rates are also very affordable and a free sample is always provided, so you have nothing to lose.

I have several past commissions up on my HF page, but I do not have publicly available samples of my past guro works, but rest assured I've handled such before.

Here are my HF and discord info, I hope to hear from any interested parties soon!

HF
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Asswriter

discord
WrightRightWrite#1073

 No.16735

What are your limits?



 No.16618[Reply]

Any higher power that would grant any better life to my enemies is not one I willingly and wittingly serve.
If any god or comparable spirit or any entity at all uses me to further its own gains and also assists these cancers, who deserve only eternal torment and should have nothing more than to have never existed, then such which has used me has betrayed me and is evil for it
If there is any God worth praying to, it will enable me to undo every awful thing that ever happened and erase any enjoyable moment for those who wronged me.
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 No.16640

>>16624
If this makes you cringe, you're weak.

 No.16648

Sure is summer in here.

 No.16673

>>16648
up yours

 No.16675

>>16640
Cringe, yikes, have sex, etc.

 No.16694




 No.16627[Reply]

Mike entered the hospital room and slowly shut the door behind him, locking it with his keycard. "What took you so long?", a soft voice called out, startling him.

Chris waved at him from her bed, amidst a forest of tubes, wires and monitors. Mike hurried over and dropped his backpack besides the bed. He leaned over and kissed his girlfriend on the lips. She pulled him in closer, and opened her mouth, letting Mike swirl his tongue around hers. Mike savored the sensation as they french kissed. The two broke off, saliva stringing from each others lips.

Chris looked down at her lap. "Mike, I've gotten worse", she mumbled. "The doc says I've only got a couple weeks left in me". Mike felt his legs stagger, his heart dropping down into his stomach. "W-What? But t-the treatment was going so w-well", he stuttered in shock. She looked up at him, a regretful look on her face. "I lied", she said simply, her head turned away. "I was being selfish. Seeing you every day, I didn't want to see you sad or worried about me."

Her fingers fidgeted with the IV tube inserted into her arm. She looked back at him, tears rolling down her face."I'm sorry, you deserved to know", her voice cracked.

Mike sat on the bed, swung his legs over, and embraced her tightly. She wrapped her arms around his body and pulled him closer. "Fuck me", she whispered. Mike shivered as her warm breath caressed his ear. "I don't want to die a virgin."

Chris pushed him away, sat up, and undid the buttons on her hospital gown, revealing her firm stomach and modest, palm sized breasts. Mike felt his dick twitch and pulse as she pulled the gown off entirely, leaving her naked. Before her illness, Chris had been the star of the Sir Oakbridge Secondary School Senior Girls soccer team, and her body still retained traces of that athleticism.

Her slender fingers gracefully pulled the fly down on Mike's jeans. He felt his heart flutter as she pulled his semi erect dick out and grasped it in her warm palms. Chris pulled the bed sheet over them and jerked Mike's dick until it grew stiff and ram rod straight. She moved herself down the bed until she was face to face with Mike's manhood. She took his cock into her mouth and pushed herself down until her nose bumped against his pelvis. Chris bobbed her head up and down, licking and sucking Mike's cock. He felt his climax coming and grabbed her head, pushing it down as he blasting thick strings of cum down hPost too long. Click here to view the full text.
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 No.16641

>>16634
This was pretty cute. You thinking of a sequel? Probably either a funeral fuck or even the mortician having a go?

 No.16642

>>16641
Yeah, I was thinking about doing a sequel in the morgue.

 No.16649

One Last Time

Robert the mortician slowly zipped open the bag. A young girl's serene face stared up at him, her dull, unseeing eyes reflecting the harsh white light of the surgical lamp.

He felt his heartbeat quicken. Oh, how he loved to work on the young and attractive. Robert loved the feel of their soft skin, still pliant and smooth, running under his fingers. He loved their full heads of glossy hair, sometimes still braided or curled or put up in a ponytail, their fresh faces with not a hint of stress or age, still soft with youth.

Most importantly, he loved to give the most attractive, most youthful "clients" (as he liked to refer to the corpses) a sending away gift for their trip to the afterlife.

The mortician snapped back from his reverie and pulled the zipper down fully. Robert took a cursory glance at the ID tag tied to the girl's toe. One Christina Luccini, age 17. Time of death was 7:43PM, only half an hour ago. A patient from the palliative care ward.

He jotted it down in his tablet, and continued looking over the body. Christina had been a sporty girl, he could tell. Her abdomen still bore the traces of a 6 pack, her thighs and legs were firm and still slightly muscular, and overall her form was slim with barely a trace of body fat. Robert leaned over and took a sniff. She smelt of sweat and of something vaguely pungent. He placed a finger on her stomach and ran it down to her pelvis. Her skin was slick with perspiration, and still slightly warm.

Robert licked his lips, his fingers trembling in anticipation. He pulled open his trousers and gave his dick a few preparatory wanks. It sprouted up, stiff as a steel rod. With great care he clambered onto the table and slowly spread Chris's muscular legs open, only to stop in surprise at what he found. Her shaved pussy was moist and dripping with cum. Someone else had fucked her before him, perhaps a loved one visiting her one last time.

Robert felt his dick go limp. He might be a creepy necrophiliac, but he still had a moral compass of sorts. Chris had already gotten her going away gift in her cooling womb, and from an intimate one. He dejectedly got off the table and pushed her legs back together. The mortician consoled himself by snapping plenty of pictures for his private wanking collection at home.

 No.16655

From a couple weeks to about five minutes? At least aim for some consistency.

That said fucking terminal patients sounds hot.

 No.16656

>>16655
I figured the extra physical exertion from having sex would strain her heart too much. Not that I'm a doctor or anything, I don't know if an actual terminal heart disease would be affected by fucking for about 5 minutes.



 No.16570[Reply]

Couldn't sleep because this setting kept running in my head, feel free to add to it or correct anything that seems off.

Just as raven finished drying off after her bath she's assaulted by Terra. Who quickly slides 2 fingers in her.

She quickly shoves her off and asks "what is it?"

Terra answers "I just wanted a little taste of you." then sucks her fingers clean of Raven's juices. "MMM you sure you don't want to donate to the cook out? speaking of how do we look on meat for it?"

"I'm certain I don't want to donate my clit and tits or my whole, we have plenty meat as it is, 15 criminals this month we busted for crimes enough to harvest, 12 cocks for the grill, 1 whole male, and 2 sets of clits and tits, I'm keeping the clits to myself this time."

Terra responds "just cocks this time or cocks and balls? What can I do to get one of the clits? come on i'll do almost anything."

"Just cocks I prefer to leave the balls, horny with no release is a more fitting punishment to me. as for the clit you'd like i'll trade you one for yours or maybe you can convince your BF Beast Boy to fuck me. I'm sure his shape shifting let's him find the perfect cock when he fucks. Then we can harvest his cock and let him regrow it. He can right?"

"No, same as you not going to give up my clit either. and Yeah he can regrow lost parts, just takes time. I think he's regrown since the last time I harvested his cock so I'll try to talk him into it . . . I really want a clit to eat they come up so rarely."
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 No.16654

a lot of world building here. haven't seen a clit focused story before. Given the title I was gopping to see raven or terra cooked.



 No.12784[Reply]

Part 1
Akaine opened the door into her cold and dark basement. She shivered for a second and turned the light on. Many eyes opened and widened, some in weariness and confusion, and some in fear. She smiled.

“How is everyone?” She asked the room, but it stayed quiet. There were 4 different young women in the room, with the acception of one young man as well.

There was Yuri, a small girl at the age of 11. She had soft blonde hair in pigtails accompanied by a light pink ribbon. She loved Disney shows and liked playing video games with her older brother.

Nike, a senior in highschool, about to graduate. She had long, purple hair tracing down to her ass. Her body was very grown up, with D sized breasts and nice curves around her belly and thighs. She was a big anime fan and enjoyed the communities. She was a borderline weeaboo, even with a fictional “waifu”. Of course, no one in school knew that.

Jasmine, a 15 year old with short, light brown hair. Her face was very soft looking and she was mistaken to be younger often. She was the only one of the girls wearing clothes, having a light pink skirt on and a small laced bra over her B cup breasts. She likes to watch dramas like Shameless and frequents tumblr.

Christina, a 12 year old in the first year of middle school. She was a bit chubby but still had amazing curves and looked very pretty to Akaine. She had short, brown hair and had a purple ribbon covering most of it. She likes hanging out with her friends and enjoys chatting with people online.

Last but not least, was Adrian. He had dark brown hair that was down to his neck and only briefs covering him. He had been the only boy that Akaine had liked in school, hence why he was down here with the all girls. He liked a lot of video games and lurked on websites like Imgur and Reddit frequently.

Then there was Akaine, a 16 year old girl with long brown hair. She was very shy and girly, and loved cute clothes. She was wearing a short, purple dress that was sparkly and light.

 No.12785

Part 2 coming later tonight (Probably)

 No.12804

I'm looking forward to it. Please don't pull a me and forget all about it.

 No.12805

Interesting^^

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 No.16653

Maddy the story! You forgot



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