/dis/ - Discussion

>>807
Hmm, interesting! My idea of a trap is to use a dead woman's body to lure a horny fellow to fuck her.The body should be positioned in a way that will make him think she is still alive and when he starts fucking her the machine grabs him and slowly kills him! You can add a twist, if he can cum inside the corpse in 20 seconds from activation he will go free! What do you think?^^

I sort of already designed one unexpected trap in my story where boys lose their dicks while trying to fuck corpse of the girl :)

>>808
I think abstract "machine" is a bit too ambiguous and it is hard to even imagine how it could happen without some use of magic or ultra advanced technology.

But by following your idea I came to this:
that there is a typical setting of a girls stuck in the wall. with her butt fully open and available and when as usual some guy comes to fuck her he gets trapped too now getting his ass exposed for others at this point I think it turns into Gay trap :) Unless that character was Futa.


More realistic design would be placing a bottle of lube next to the girl but rather than a lube it is superglue :) and rather than being stuck in the wall the girl is laying down on the table because she got stuck with that glue.

>>809
I would love to read your story, I am searching for it, but just in case i can't find it could you provide me with a link? I've read some of your work and I really like your style!

Could you write more like this? I like the idea of a gloryhole trap or a stuck in the wall trap.
What about on the bed in a dimlit room with her ass up and head covered by blankets, or on the edge of a bathtub with curtains closed and her ass sticking up in the air?

And yes I didn't think of a design for a trap but I was thinking maybe a claw that grabs his head or something that will attach to his neck and slowly close in.

I would love to see this work on a mother and son pair when the son comes home horny and eager to fuck his mom!

>>810

You can find it here
https://archive.guro.cx/3dcg/res/32494.html
that specific part is somewhere in the middle of thread

>What about on the bed in a dimlit room with her ass up and head covered by blankets, or on the edge of a bathtub with curtains closed and her ass sticking up in the air?

And how all of that is a trap? what is supposed to happen?

>>811
Read above, he said something will attach to the mans neck or head and begin to squeze it and if the one trapped doesn't cum inside the body in 20s the trap will crush his skull or neck.He didn't gave the details like this but that's what I've understood.I'm guessing a sensor will detect the moment of climax.But I don't actually care how it works I think it's a cool idea!

I assumed that those 2 lines above refer to different things not to the same trap.

This is almost like one of the cut traps from Saw 2, but with some changes and major additions. I even put this into a story form for you all:

The victim is a prostitute, she's strapped to a chair situated on top of scaffolding. She's in her usual slutty working outfit. Her tits are tied down tightly with metal wire connected to a motor, and there is a waffle iron open infront of her. Below her is a long spring loaded metal rod, connected to a timer.

The woman awakens to what feels like a hangove to her. Shr remembers serving a client, stepping out of the car and then that's the last thing she remembers. She tries to rub her eyes, but finds that her wrists are secured in leather straps. "I don't know this place!" she thinks, looking around the empty dark industrial space she's in. "HELP! WHERE AM I? LET ME OUT OF HERE!" She screams and thrashes around, which pains her chest greatly. She looks down, and sees a faint relfection of light from the loops metal wire that have been tightened around her boobs. The realization sets in. It's that serial killer that puts people in sick games. She notices a tape recorder, just in her restricted arm's reach. She manages to press play, and listens as the tape crackles to life. "Hello Sara. Over the years you've been selling your body on the streets for cheap, not appreciating the other gifts you have. You're relying on the simple instincts of lonely people, and prey on their money, using your form to lure them in for cheap "love". Tonight you'll show me if you can let go of your ways and looks to become a more productive member of society. Before you is a tool that will allow a motor to cut your straps, but also sever and ruin your "tools of the trade". All you need to do, is to press your face on it. If you choose not to, you will be penetrated, albeit much more violently than ever before. You have 30 seconds to choose, but do hurry. Let the games begin." The tape goes mute with static, and an audible ticking sound begins, along with the humming of an electric motor. Sara looks around her, expecting someone to be there to help her out of this, but alas, no one is here for her. She has to make a choice now.

1. Live: Sara, tears in her eyes, grits her teeth and quickly but somewhat gently jams her face to the waffle iron, left side first. The iron nudges forward, creating a clicking sound. The motor below gets connected to the pulley system bound around her straps and boobs. Almost in the blink of an eye, and blinding pain, the wires tighten rapidly. The leather straps snap off the chair, and 2 fleshy thuds sound as Sara's amputated breasts hit the dusty concrete floor below. Sara screams in agony, but the ticking has stopped and she's free to go now.

2. Die: Sara sobbingly inches her face closer to the iron, but hesitates again. She collapses into a fit of crying, and screams up at the ceilling. At the same time, unbeknownst to Sara, the timer has hit 30 seconds now. In a flash, the signal is sent to the spring mechanism down below, which lets go with a loud, almost gunshot like snap. The steel rod, shoots up, first striking through the plywood panel, then the wooden chair and finally up through her asshole. Within a second, the steel rod has impaled Sara completely from ass to mouth. Sara's final moments are spent as she watches the end of the blood coated rod. Her eyes are wide and welling with tears. The rod is partially in her throat, broke her jaw and knocked her front teeth out, so there are nothing more than a few gurgled moans coming out of her. She goes limp, and her dark blue eyes roll back. Another victim for the list.

This trap uses bands that can shrink: a band around the waist, and bands around the biceps and thighs. The prisoner faces a series of painful trials. Failing a trial makes the waist band shrink, while passing a trial makes the limb bands shrink. To escape, the prisoner needs to shrink the limb bands a certain amount (tight enough to force doctors to amputate) and avoid crushing their organs.

The trials involve a button that electrocutes and suffocates the prisoner. The prisoner must hold down the button for some amount of time. Releasing it early fails the trial. This happens over and over again until the victim is released or dies.

same author as the shrinking band post above.

This one is for people afraid of heights: the victim's wrists are bound to a balloon large enough to carry their weight, which will reach neutral buoyancy maybe 500-1000 meters above the ground. The balloon is released to float away into the wind. A device will sever the prisoner's attachment to the balloon after some amount of time.

The prisoner has no way to save themself, their survival depends on whether or not someone on the ground spots them under the balloon, takes a helicopter up to them, and rescues them before they are released to fall to their death. For the reader's enjoyment, the prisoner is naked and gagged.

The prisoner has their eyes removed, and a device mounted on their head will puncture their eardrums to deafen them when a timer runs out. Before then, the naked prisoner has to navigate a large maze of thorns to escape. The maze has auditory cues to help them navigate. Once they are deafened, escape will be all but impossible, and they will end up wandering around shredding themself until they die of thirst or bleed out. To escape within the time limit, they'll need to move fast – too fast to carefully avoid the thorns

To ensure that the prisoner keeps moving, floor tiles slooowly depress under the prisoner's weight until spikes under the tile start to protrude through little holes; when the prisoner's weight is removed, the tile slowly rises again.

I'm using TOR so my ID changes

This one is nasty: the trap consists of an arm-length tube with a grinder/sander wheel at the back spinning at high speed, and the wheel axis can move forward and backward in the tube. The goal is to make the axis reach the mouth of the tube. The way to make it move is to resist the spinning of the wheel, and the only way to do that is to press on it with your own flesh. While the grinder encounters resistance (while your flesh is pressed against it), it very slowly moves forward in the tube. Otherwise, it slowly moves backward at the same pace. To lose the minimum amount of flesh, you need the willpower to keep your flesh constantly pressed against the wheel without rests. Once the wheel reaches the mouth of the tube, the door to your cell unlocks.

I wrote out a very sexy & detailed saw trap but then technical difficulties & I lost it (;´Д`)

Took like an hour to write

Maybe when I stop feeling immeasurable disappointment I'll summarize it

Guess that'll teach me to not draft my replies directly on GC...

Okay, let's give this another shot. Unfortunately this time I won't be describing it in as much detail.

The trap has 2 victims: a woman who was a freeloader off her family, & a lazy ceo who delegated all his work to others while reaping the rewards of his underpaid workers. I think the backstory behind the "crimes" of the victims is really important, & in a good saw trap, the punishment fits the crime. There are also nice parallels between these two, both being leeches, but one having low social status & the other having high social status.

There are 2 chambers, both soundproof, with a clear acrylic or tempered glass wall between them. In one of them, the woman is naked & suspended. She's wrapped in sharp wire & can’t move. The man is wearing his business suit & has a control panel with 2 buttons: one labeled "save her" & the other labeled "save yourself"

They both get separate spiels from Jigsaw about their respective crimes.

To the woman, he basically says "you've always chosen to put yourself at the mercy of others. this trap should help you appreciate your freedom more, because now your life is at the mercy of a selfish man."

To the man, he basically says "your workers die because they lack money for food, heating, rent, & medicine. they could be making a living wage, but that money is instead going to you, even though you didn't work for it. I want to show you what it's like to actually kill someone to save yourself, since that's basically what you're doing everytime you cash your paycheck."

The man has to choose a button within a minute or they'll both die. Will he choose to sacrifice himself to save her, or will he kill her to save himself?

If he chooses to save her & kill himself, he wins!

A tiny needle comes out of the button & drugs him with a sedative, but before it fully takes effect, he has to watch her die:

The wires around her tighten, ripping her to pieces until she's just a pile of bloody meat chunks. Before she dies, Jigsaw tells her that the man wanted to save her, but he couldn't allow her to actually live after that, because she wouldn't learn her lesson from it.

Then, the man passes out from the drug. He wakes up in rags in a sweatshop that produces his companies own product. He tries to tell people he's actually the ceo, but finds out his vocal chords were cut.

If he chooses to kill her & save himself, he's punished for his selfishness.

The wires around the woman become highly electrified. This doesn't shock her, because the wires are more conductive than flesh & she's not grounded anyway, but the resistive heating does superheat them, leaving her with criss-crossing burn marks all over her body. After a second or two, the wires sag & break, & she falls to the floor.

Jigsaw tells her that the man wanted to kill her, thus proving you can't rely on the kindness of others. Then a door opens up for her & she walks home injured & naked, but alive.

Meanwhile, the man has been paralyzed by a poison needle hidden behind the "save yourself" button. He can't move, but he can still breathe & still feel.

Jigsaw tells him he'll "suffer for his psychopathy in a tomb of his own greed". Then, a machine drops lit tinder atop him, lighting his suit ablaze.

If he doesn't choose in time, she gets ripped to shreds by the wire, while the room he's in slowly raises to oven-like temperatures & he's cooked alive.